almost completed my FIRST song :)

Lectric · Post by **Lectric** » Sat Jun 18, 2011 3:34 pm

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heres where it is now. all suggestions are welcome i wanna get this completely ace

tell me whatcha tiinkz

omgitzjoe8] · Post by **omgitzjoe8]** » Sat Jun 18, 2011 6:07 pm

Wobbles need more bass!!!!!

SignalRecon · Post by **SignalRecon** » Sat Jun 18, 2011 6:08 pm

Loving your intro!

SignalRecon · Post by **SignalRecon** » Sat Jun 18, 2011 6:12 pm

But yea dude, your main wobble needs more bass for sure, the frequency is off it sounds out of place. Try this: Double up that track with the intrument as well, sweep one low with the filter and one higher up, it will give you a rcher sound with decent harmonics which will make it sound nice and rich, and give you more control to place it where you want. But your intro sounds very good, maybe make the last 8 bars of your intro shorter on the beats and the kick upsweep longer to add impact.

MikeDreams · Post by **MikeDreams** » Sat Jun 18, 2011 6:29 pm

I think it would sound sooo much sick if the wobbles were lower pitched, but this is really good my first song sucked major ass.

Lectric · Post by **Lectric** » Sat Jun 18, 2011 10:19 pm

haha thanks guys. i know the bassline needs sub bass i just left it off when i was working because for some reason the sub vst kept over-ing my cpu levels

i for got to re add it when i rendered

but what did you mean when you said doubling up the track and filtering it? im intrested in making it sound more harmonic and i just didnt really understand what you said

Lectric · Post by **Lectric** » Sat Jun 18, 2011 11:51 pm

bamp

Nantes · Post by **Nantes** » Sun Jun 19, 2011 12:01 am

the bassline is very creative but it doesnt match the same mood as the intro. its kind of out of place. once you fix that it will be Nantes' iPod worthy!

Lectric · Post by **Lectric** » Sun Jun 19, 2011 1:36 pm

bumpski. i wanna know what people really think i should change

Lectric · Post by **Lectric** » Sun Jun 19, 2011 8:32 pm

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