Check out my newest tune!! My first post also

[omnichron]

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Just uploaded it, let me know what you think! I made it with ableton, its only a two day work in progress though. Any feedback would be the tits. Thanks errbody

[mogrizzly]

Nice and Welcome aboard.

[ElSonido]

Love the piano and sax. Great elements. That sucking sound doesn't mix well though in the initial part. I think there's too much midrange activity and it's competing for a position. A lot of the track is midrange. Although a lot of the elements sound pretty cool, there's too much going on, in a Skrillex type way. If you were going for that all power to you.

Otherwise, take a spectrum analyser to each lead part, pick its peak frequency, cut around that, make sure they all have a different peak. That should get them to mesh a bit better. Otherwise, use pan. Stereo has a lot of space.

I can tell you're influenced by noise-step though, and for that, it's not bad. Kicks need to punch through wayyyyyy more for that though. Sidechaining is your friend. Just to duck all of the midrangy parts slightly to let the kick breathe. The snare's drowning in the midrange too. Noise step generally has treble bias, a big reverb splash and a lot of parallel compression on the snare too. Yours goes tshhhhhh. Which fits the intermediate parts really well. But in the noisy robot sex it may be worth trying to make it go kahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, if you know what I mean?

You're doing pretty well though.

[omnichron]

Wow haha that is some awesome feedback thanks Elsonido I will definitely try all of those things out.