Iram robot monkey (im 13 plz look and give feedback)

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iramdubstep
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Iram robot monkey (im 13 plz look and give feedback)

Post by iramdubstep » Sat Jun 25, 2011 5:29 am

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So im 13 years old and started making dubstep on fl studio when i was like 12.
To me it sounds ok but i would like it if you guys gave me some comments on it?:))
is it good for my age?

heres another one i made its my newest one:)
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Re: Iram robot monkey (im 13 plz look and give feedback)

Post by StratoJazz » Sat Jun 25, 2011 6:05 am

It would be cool if you took the first tune and made it into a dubstep/house kind of track. It's pretty sparse sounding and it would be really cool with a double time feel. By the way, sick wobble towards the end of the tune.

2nd tune: Nice drum sounds and gun shots, make your beat a little more syncopated. I also like how you use more than one wobble sound to outline different sections of your tune, and again, sick wobbles.
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Feel free to give the track above a listen. Also tell me what you like or what
you might improve.
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Re: Iram robot monkey (im 13 plz look and give feedback)

Post by iramdubstep » Sat Jun 25, 2011 6:12 am

thank you very much :)

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Re: Iram robot monkey (im 13 plz look and give feedback)

Post by thenuttyproducer » Sat Jun 25, 2011 9:43 pm

Sounds nice man! Big respect on those drum sounds!

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Re: Iram robot monkey (im 13 plz look and give feedback)

Post by parked » Sun Jun 26, 2011 12:30 pm

Nice sounds

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Re: Iram robot monkey (im 13 plz look and give feedback)

Post by iramdubstep » Mon Jun 27, 2011 12:19 am

thanks everyone:))

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