Hatchet Wob [Filthy Dubstep!!!]

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Hatchet Wob [Filthy Dubstep!!!]

Post by Geek Boy » Sun Jun 26, 2011 12:30 pm

Hi I'm new to these boards, this is my very first post, I've not written a lot of dubstep and so I'd really value some feedback on this track I've been working on;

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It seemed to get good feedback on another forum where I sometimes post but that was not an exclusively dubstep oriented board.

Any and all feedback, constructive criticism etc, very much appreciated!


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Re: Hatchet Wob [Filthy Dubstep!!!]

Post by vyvyan » Sun Jun 26, 2011 3:06 pm

Very good, great break! Find a label for this one!

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Re: Hatchet Wob [Filthy Dubstep!!!]

Post by Geek Boy » Sun Jun 26, 2011 3:40 pm

Cheers! Do you know any dubstep labels that accept demo submissions?

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Re: Hatchet Wob [Filthy Dubstep!!!]

Post by vyvyan » Sun Jun 26, 2011 4:44 pm

Any basically, as long as the sound is good: there are some advices in this forum (i don't remember where, do a lil research)

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Re: Hatchet Wob [Filthy Dubstep!!!]

Post by Geek Boy » Sun Jun 26, 2011 6:38 pm

Cheers, will do that! ^_^

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Re: Hatchet Wob [Filthy Dubstep!!!]

Post by Big Freq » Mon Jun 27, 2011 12:46 am

usually im not a fan of filth but this is a pretty cool track.

that piano part is pretty sick. what VST is that? or is it a real keyboard?

the use of the trance synth is interesting too...

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Re: Hatchet Wob [Filthy Dubstep!!!]

Post by Geek Boy » Mon Jun 27, 2011 12:13 pm

Cheers, I'm really glad you like the track! The piano is the Challen Piano from Propellerhead's Abbey Roads refill. It's such a lovely piano patch, I pretty much never use any other.

Okay, feedback: Wow! Really really, nice tune! Love those chilled out Rhodes bits and all the little bit crushed synth flourishes. And that bass is just awesome! Yeah, can't really think of any constructive criticism, I wouldn't change a thing, really nice, smooth track!

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Re: Hatchet Wob [Filthy Dubstep!!!]

Post by TeesriAankh » Tue Jun 28, 2011 8:26 pm

Very Beautiful melodies. I really the drums on this one too. Keep it up :)

Feedback for feedback? http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=205498

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Re: Hatchet Wob [Filthy Dubstep!!!]

Post by headtrauma » Tue Jun 28, 2011 9:41 pm

This track is dope, I really like it alot.

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Re: Hatchet Wob [Filthy Dubstep!!!]

Post by StratoJazz » Tue Jun 28, 2011 10:05 pm

That is an excellent drop at the beginning of your tune. I also like the piano part later in the song really changes the mood. As far as some criticism, I wish that your drums were alittle more present in the beginning the tune.

That aside, you have some sick synths going on. You've really got a great sound.
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you might improve.
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Re: Hatchet Wob [Filthy Dubstep!!!]

Post by -[2]DAY_- » Tue Jun 28, 2011 10:09 pm

Nice one! My input would be to try to get your mix a little brighter overall. It's just a tad dampened-sounding to me. could be my playback system, but often times i have this problem with my own mixes coming out dull. Maybe just a tiny little hi-shelf on the master, or a bit more high end in some of the elements, namely snare and melodic stuff
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