lol...ya'll actually think i can't make dubstep...lol

[c-zar]

I am new to dubstep so it does sound completely like that generic brand. But as you will see....it is superior.

Soundcloud

Soundcloud

[steeze]

Sounds a bit sloppy to me man, too many elements that don't compliment each other. Lots of clashing frequencies, and melodies that are out of key and time with each other. Try eqing each element so they sit a little better in the mix and keep to 2-3 main musical ideas at a time. Keep at it though

[c-zar]

thats just you man....thanks though!

[nylle]

shit wont load for me

probably not missin much based on what other peeps sayin bout u

[charleswpeck]

lolz at tagz

[SignalRecon]

Due to uncontrollable circumstances, we ask that you do not feed the trolls/bears/egotistical douche rappers with grade 7 edukashun, that is all.

Park Maintenance.

[c-zar]

white people can be so corny some time ^

[EmpathyDJ]

>>>white people can be so corny some time ^

RACIST TROLL IS RACIST

[c-zar]

[Big Freq]

czar is what you call a "summer cigarette"

hes out of school with nothing to do but troll

be on your way

[charleswpeck]

czar is what you call a "summer cigarette"

hes out of school with nothing to do but troll

be on your way

[c-zar]

whatever....back to critiques. For the first dude, he is right. THat analogue'y wobble thingy that comes in in the main part needs to be taken out. It throws the whole beat off. I am not perfect.

[SignalRecon]

[c-zar]

^fun. made me lulz.

[SignalRecon]

>>>white people can be so corny some time ^

RACIST TROLL IS RACIST

Before we all let this die, I just want to say that I thoroughly enjoyed the reverse racist card drop... we can't be expected to not cry out against blatant generalisation and prejudice.

Can't let the man keep you down, hey we should make a rap video, and just like Waka Flaka Flame did in "Hard in tha Paint" - Have it stop midway through the video with with the cops showing up and a message that says "Due to a L.A. gang injunction this production was stopped" ...

And then we (45-50 hard looking white people gambling/drinking/doing drugs in the street with minors screaming/singing about commiting murder over trivial matters and our love of general illegality) could then put on a sad face and act like we are being persecuted by society, and proceed to say this would never happen in an upscale neighbourhood (you're right waka, the cops would definitely NOT be there faster than they would in the hood...)

Doing this would allow us to perpetuate to our impressionable youths that they should misdirect their anger for their personal short-comings towards society and the police because "they were dealt a losing hand" and shouldnt bother trying, therefore allowing us to keep our for profit privatized jail system full and the tax burden high.

[SignalRecon]

^fun. made me lulz.

Kanye said it, not me. That chat bubble is clearly pointing to him.

[Lectric]

Czar youve been on this forum for two years and youve proven to be its biggest troll. you shit like "im better than rusko" and that your the best on the forum for makin hip hop. now you show us this song and it sounds like an anus trying to sing. get the fuck out.

[adambrown666]

Dont be so sure of yourself OP, always critique your work and think of ways to make it better. Saying your work is superior just makes you sound like an asshole.

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[Lectric]

Dont be so sure of yourself OP, always critique your work and think of ways to make it better. Saying your work is superior just makes you sound like an asshole. ]

youre obviously not used to czar

[SignalRecon]

Hey czar: