New tune- feedback needed!

[bobbyc]

So, just finished this tune, bit of a chilled number, any feedback going?
Also, Im having a problem with the bass, it kinda slowly oscilates in volume every now and then for no real reason that i can think of- its just a MIDI clip repeating, so im at a loss to explain it.... Maybe something to do with the distortion unit or something?? Pretty novice when it comes to this stuff so any ideas would be appreciated...?

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[paradigm001]

I give you feedback in exchage for feedback on my latest track, cause I have no idea how it sounds after listening to it a thousand times. The intro you have some lowpass action going on> Its more like a rummble. You should eq that out. Then you can hear your bass much better. Distortion units the more they get distorted lose volume. Good start though keep it up.

[bobbyc]

Cheers man, sound advice, dropped that rumbling pad out when the actual bass comes in and it sounds much clearer! I sort the distortion later.
I like your recent tune good bass sound and the twinkly sort of melodys that come in later are cool. Only thing i would say is the beat gets a wee bit repetitive after a few mins, there not much variation, maybe needs some more fills and stuff. I prefer a more punchy sounding kick too, but thats just personal preference i guess. Good stuff though overall! And cheers for the advice dude!