my first song, FILTHY commercial style

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my first song, FILTHY commercial style

Post by alus » Wed Jul 27, 2011 12:12 am

first mix. no remastering, no hardware, very little knowledge, no nothing actually, just fruity loops and stolen software. commercial style... no premade loops of course. ive made it in 2 nights. i know a lot of dubstep, but i knew nothing about production, so i red couple things like this forum, downloaded pirate fl studio, some sample packs, watch some tutorials on low bass and here we are. its... filthy if you must call it like that. its not old climatic dubstep but listen:

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Re: benga would be proud.

Post by Kinky » Wed Jul 27, 2011 12:18 am

Ahaha; the use of massive makes me happy :)

This is your first tune?

Also; just noticed... The mixing is slightly off... Which is kinda understandable; if it is your first tune.. Notice how some of the wobbles sound louder than others. Also... The 3/4 kick-snare beat gets old... Mix it up!

Hahah 3:20 gets sick... Someone does drugssssssssssssssss ;D
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Re: benga would be proud.

Post by alus » Wed Jul 27, 2011 2:36 pm

yes, my first tune. i had big problems with mixing it, wonder if someone could correct/remaster this song?

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Re: benga would be proud.

Post by Kinky » Wed Jul 27, 2011 3:23 pm

DSF has some great spots for help, go give the production bible a look man, it'll help you with the overall mix of things.

Mastering is the final effects/shit added to the track after it's finished... So don't really ever use the term "Master" unless it's completely done.

On another note, all that really needed to be done was to make sure that all the separate wobbles are peaking around the same area.

Maybe layer a sub under it aswell, but that might be something that can be done at a later time... Subs aren't exactly the easiest thing to write at first, so it takes some practice.
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Re: benga would be proud.

Post by alus » Wed Jul 27, 2011 4:31 pm

i cant open the mixdown and mastering threads in the bible. there are no links?

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Re: benga would be proud.

Post by -[2]DAY_- » Wed Jul 27, 2011 4:41 pm

good sounds....good job for a first tune, dunno why u think u have to reference benga to get listens though, that is kind of obnoxious
and shush up about the warez, its a bad look

you need to read the moneyshot thread
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Re: my first mix, commercial style

Post by alus » Wed Jul 27, 2011 7:03 pm

fixed

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Re: my first song, "FILTHY" commercial style

Post by alus » Thu Jul 28, 2011 8:05 pm

oi, anyone?

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Re: my first song, "FILTHY" commercial style

Post by -[2]DAY_- » Thu Jul 28, 2011 8:10 pm

track has some weighty bass in it and great sounds. just keep at it, work on mixing, keep reading and listening and making tunes
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