TripNotic-Kogarth

[TripNotic]

Soundcloud

this is a song i am working on my goal is to make it sound like downlink/nit grit style... i would greatly appreciate any feedback and i will return the favor thank you

[Be-1ne]

First piece of advice. Don't label your thread stating your age.!
Second Piece of Advice. Read the instructions for posting.!
Third Piece of Advice. Embed your track in your post!
and fourth and final piece of Advice. Get involved in the board and feedback on other users tracks for more constructive feedback.

Safe

[Elephantitan]

please and thank you
http://soundcloud.com/thizzleguy/kogarth

Your track contains the characteristics of what would be considered dubstep (on both sides) but there's very little consideration to notation, deep bass, hat/crash arrangement and the vocal sampling is out of sync. While you've done a good job at keeping the production listenable (which is something not a lot are able to do when starting out) you've completely left out a lot of melody from your track so everything feels rather random than properly and musically contrived. Just slow down and try to put more feel into it and you'll do wonders.

[TripNotic]

First piece of advice. Don't label your thread stating your age.!
Second Piece of Advice. Read the instructions for posting.!
Third Piece of Advice. Embed your track in your post!
and fourth and final piece of Advice. Get involved in the board and feedback on other users tracks for more constructive feedback.

Safe

i wasnt stating my age to sound like i was bragging or anything more like how much i needed some tips

[oprs]

well, so if someone comes in and makes a thread asking for some pointers and they are 27 whos gonna care? age doesn't matter in production just do good work.

[Be-1ne]

First piece of advice. Don't label your thread stating your age.!
Second Piece of Advice. Read the instructions for posting.!
Third Piece of Advice. Embed your track in your post!
and fourth and final piece of Advice. Get involved in the board and feedback on other users tracks for more constructive feedback.

Safe

i wasnt stating my age to sound like i was bragging or anything more like how much i needed some tips

Good to see you didn't heed any of my advice. Still no embedded track and no feedback on other posters tunes. well done

[phrex]

First piece of advice. Don't label your thread stating your age.!
Second Piece of Advice. Read the instructions for posting.!
Third Piece of Advice. Embed your track in your post!
and fourth and final piece of Advice. Get involved in the board and feedback on other users tracks for more constructive feedback.

Safe

i wasnt stating my age to sound like i was bragging or anything more like how much i needed some tips

[Elephantitan]

Oh, i get how this works here. You guys follow the 'pressurize-till-it-turns-into-diamond' technique or you taking the piss since he's a 16 year old?

[TripNotic]

First piece of advice. Don't label your thread stating your age.!
Second Piece of Advice. Read the instructions for posting.!
Third Piece of Advice. Embed your track in your post!
and fourth and final piece of Advice. Get involved in the board and feedback on other users tracks for more constructive feedback.

Safe

i wasnt stating my age to sound like i was bragging or anything more like how much i needed some tips

Good to see you didn't heed any of my advice. Still no embedded track and no feedback on other posters tunes. well done

my bad im very new to this

[TripNotic]

Soundcloud

This is a track that i am working on i would greatly appreciate any feedback, i am pretty new to producing but i can try to give feedback on your tracks also. thanks you

[TripNotic]

please and thank you
http://soundcloud.com/thizzleguy/kogarth

Your track contains the characteristics of what would be considered dubstep (on both sides) but there's very little consideration to notation, deep bass, hat/crash arrangement and the vocal sampling is out of sync. While you've done a good job at keeping the production listenable (which is something not a lot are able to do when starting out) you've completely left out a lot of melody from your track so everything feels rather random than properly and musically contrived. Just slow down and try to put more feel into it and you'll do wonders.

thanks a lot for the advice i agree with you on the melody of it i have made more musical songs in the past, this is my first attempt at dubstep and im still in the process of figuring out how to make the dirty synth's flow i don't consider this track finished yet one bit

[paradigm001]

Your tunes predictable at times and doesnt synch up at all at other like after you say shut up bitch, that part sounds fucked up. Some good sound in there though, but you still have to make a proper dubstep beat.

[TripNotic]

Your tunes predictable at times and doesnt synch up at all at other like after you say shut up bitch, that part sounds fucked up. Some good sound in there though, but you still have to make a proper dubstep beat.

your tracks are really good quick question is making a beat before the synth suggested or the other way around?