Cloud Chamber - The Gravitron

CloudChamber · Post by **CloudChamber** » Tue Aug 30, 2011 10:36 pm

Hey all! I'm new to the forum, but I joined so that I can learn how I can improve my music. Here's a track I started working on last week:
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Any feedback you can give me would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!

Elephantitan · Post by **Elephantitan** » Tue Aug 30, 2011 10:47 pm

While that might possibly be in the top 5 of the most unique drops that I've heard, I think it could use deeper sub-bass and the kicks should be heaver to match. There should also be more variation on the drums so it doesn't get too repetitive.

CloudChamber · Post by **CloudChamber** » Wed Aug 31, 2011 12:18 am

Thanks for the input man. I'm going to try and get a new version up this weekend and I'll add those to the list of changes I'm going to make. BTW I'm hoping your unique comment is a good thing

Atom-13 · Post by **Atom-13** » Wed Aug 31, 2011 12:28 am

This is a very original track! I think that the mix is pretty good, and the sounds are good too. Maybe a little more variation in the basses wouldn't hurt, but overall solid work man.

CloudChamber · Post by **CloudChamber** » Wed Aug 31, 2011 4:05 am

Thanks dude! This is all good feedback. I really want this track, and future tracks, to be some next level shit, but I'm still learning the ropes on track arrangement and eq'ing. Keep 'em coming!

Elephantitan · Post by **Elephantitan** » Wed Aug 31, 2011 6:24 am

Trust me, Unique is always a good thing. Keep up the good work, I see brightness for you.

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