LucidPete - Dubstep@[320kbs] - I need help; first production

[LucidPete]

Cheer mates!

I am a newbie on a dubstepforum but I hope I placed my topic on the right board.

That is my first post so let me quickly introduce myself. I am Pete, 17, Poland.

Just like you guys I am a huuuge dubstep fan, but I never read about producing this kind of music.
Few days ago I started to think about twisting IN and learning this stuff.
I've never done dubstep B4, so it is my first crappy one:

http://www20.zippyshare.com/v/93957004/file.html

I need a feedback guys, what is wrong with this one, because I can tell that this is not good dubstep yet.
I know that the mastering is not done yet and this main theme is boring for a longer shot, but I want to ask you about other things.
Despite mastering and main theme, what should I change? Any clues and tips? I would be delighted for any piece of advice.

I am going to make a new one with better theme + better mastering soon. I hope that your advices will be a great benefit for my wannabe "art".

Keep in touch and have a gr8 day.

LucidPete

[LucidPete]

I was hoping for some piece of advice.
I am not looking for advertising or promotion. Just need skill. Tips..

[Phatfukk]

Firstly, stop putting yourself down, it's great for a first production! My first production was terrible.. Everybody has their own style and interpretations of what 'Dubstep' is, and you my friend, well.. your style is ace! I love the chilled out feel to your track and all the different melodies, they all work so perfectly!

And remember, mastering isn't everything; if your mix is good, i.e - the levels, good compression, eq etc.. then there's no need to be doing extensive mastering at your level.

I hope this helps, mate!

[LucidPete]

Thank you mate for cheering me up.

I am not putting myself down, I am just realist.
I know that people do not care about who I am or if I am a newbie or pro, they just listen and say - awww dude thats shitty.

ACE? Thanks, I mean I feel the music because I play violin but I do not consider it as ACE yet :p
Maybe mastering is not as that important atm but it is for sure very important stuff.

You surely helped me! Thank you.
I hope for more feedbacks and critics. Technical comments would be appreciated!

LucidPete

[LucidPete]

I am really sorry for refreshing this thread..
As I said I am not looking for promotion, just for some tips and feedbacks.
I am grateful for one answer, but I would like to know many opinions and take the good out of it.

Peace mates and I hope you can help me

Thanks in advance

[LucidPete]

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[eldoogle]

Pretty good, the wobble sounds a little weird panned to the left. Also, do your drums come up and down in volume? Sorta sounds like it to me. My advice, work on drum variation and breakdowns and building it back up.