One Republic - Apologize (Woody D Remake)(Hard/Electro)

[Woody D]

Please forgive me if the piano sound crap. This is the first time ive tried to remake a song and I havent got the first idea of how to play the piano or read music. So here it is anyway

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[Woody D]

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[oWLinDaylight]

The piano part is good. The snare sounds good in the beginning but it feels like its getting buried in the background after the drop. Try boosting it or eqing out some of the other sounds that are sitting where your snare peaks. The instruments also sound like they might be a little over compressed. I like the sound of the main synth but I think it needs a little more dynamic range and maybe some widening.

[Woody D]

Thanks for you input. Im working off a netbook at the mo, so Im not hearing the tracks I produce at the quality that you guys will be. Hopefully ill be getting myself a decent laptop or PC soon, with a good sound system!
Thanks again

[SlumCity]

if i were you i would start with a sample or stems or something loop it up then play along to get the feel of the tune considering you have no musical training, ..... the apologize things isnt too bad tho , i would give the synths a more upbeat rythm to drive the track in the main part , it plods a bit.