L.O.O.K. - Texas (George W Bushstep)

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L.O.O.K. - Texas (George W Bushstep)

Post by elyhess » Wed Oct 19, 2011 2:21 pm

My new GWbush step is un finished but i really need your feedback of whats wrong with it so far, like how can i make it louder, and how can i make it sound better and so on :) thanks!\
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Re: George W. Bush-step

Post by DJ Sampletank » Wed Oct 19, 2011 2:43 pm

Alright dude, like the intro and the first part. Some of thos bass sounds sound too seperate, they sound forced together, maybe modulate them or something, to get them to fit together. Except that, I like the samples, beat, noted etc. All good man.

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Re: George W. Bush-step

Post by elyhess » Wed Oct 19, 2011 4:09 pm

Can you specify which parts? I'm will take a look at It and defiantly take your advice, which bass sounds are you talking about?

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Re: George W. Bush-step

Post by elyhess » Wed Oct 19, 2011 10:06 pm

DJ Sampletank wrote:Alright dude, like the intro and the first part. Some of thos bass sounds sound too seperate, they sound forced together, maybe modulate them or something, to get them to fit together. Except that, I like the samples, beat, noted etc. All good man.
Which sound are you referring to, what parts of the song should i check out? give me the time in the song :D i think i know what your talking about but not sure

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Work in Progress.

Post by elyhess » Thu Oct 20, 2011 2:53 am

wondering about what i need to add to this song, general feedback!

give me your constructive critisizm

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Re: George W. Bush-step

Post by elyhess » Thu Oct 20, 2011 3:11 am

BUMP

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Re: L.O.O.K. - Texas (George W Bushstep)

Post by elyhess » Thu Oct 20, 2011 2:43 pm

Bump

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Re: L.O.O.K. - Texas (George W Bushstep)

Post by DJ Sampletank » Thu Oct 20, 2011 3:49 pm

Sup man, about 30 seconds in, the bass that comes in there, it just sounds too seperate, though a nice sound on it's own. Yeah I do like this track man, fix that and it'll be, for me, better.

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Re: L.O.O.K. - Texas (George W Bushstep)

Post by elyhess » Thu Oct 20, 2011 3:58 pm

DJ Sampletank wrote:Sup man, about 30 seconds in, the bass that comes in there, it just sounds too seperate, though a nice sound on it's own. Yeah I do like this track man, fix that and it'll be, for me, better.

How would you recommend doing that? Also, thank you for reply, haven't Been able to get much feedback
Should I add some sort of reverb to connect the beat better?

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Re: L.O.O.K. - Texas (George W Bushstep)

Post by DJ Sampletank » Thu Oct 20, 2011 4:20 pm

No worries man, I know how difficult it can be to get feedback. As for how, I'm not sure, lots of things can work, but it really comes down to personal opinion. Trial and error.

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Re: L.O.O.K. - Texas (George W Bushstep)

Post by elyhess » Thu Oct 20, 2011 4:29 pm

Cool, I'll see what I can do and repost results

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Re: L.O.O.K. - Texas (George W Bushstep)

Post by elyhess » Fri Oct 21, 2011 2:04 am

Updated version!

let me know what you all think!
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Re: L.O.O.K. - Texas (George W Bushstep)

Post by Liquistik » Sun Oct 23, 2011 11:56 am

Lovin' this track, man!

Check out mine if y'have time. It's minimal dark dubstep, my first time producing minimal, and it is minimal haha. See what y'think.

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GWBUSHSTEP, Almost finished need feedback

Post by elyhess » Sun Oct 23, 2011 4:18 pm

My almost finished george bush song, can i get some feedback on how i can improve? :)

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Re: GWBUSHSTEP, Almost finished need feedback

Post by elyhess » Sun Oct 23, 2011 9:31 pm

Anyone? feedback is hard to come by these days!

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Re: GWBUSHSTEP, Almost finished need feedback

Post by jarvis89 » Sun Oct 23, 2011 9:38 pm

lol, it sounds really cool. it sounds like your relatively new, you need to add a sub bass and you also need some compression and limiting, but the basics of a good track are there :4:

by the way i was lolling cos the gw bush samples are awesome haha

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Re: GWBUSHSTEP, Almost finished need feedback

Post by elyhess » Mon Oct 24, 2011 12:30 am

jarvis89 wrote:lol, it sounds really cool. it sounds like your relatively new, you need to add a sub bass and you also need some compression and limiting, but the basics of a good track are there :4:

by the way i was lolling cos the gw bush samples are awesome haha
:D thanks, yes i am relatively new to producing

im really looking to improve here, i just re-uploaded the song the melody part or whatever you wanna call it has a little side-chain action. let me know if you like it

also, which parts do you recommend adding sub bass to? the melody part? or the drop parts?

ive compressed quite a lot of things in this track, but i havent used a limiter, what exactly should i use the limiter for?

:) thank you for feedback! hard to get these days!

EDIT: Updated song should be signiture

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Re: GWBUSHSTEP, Almost finished need feedback

Post by ReachZenith » Mon Oct 24, 2011 3:47 am

Well you would just limit certain sounds, that are coming through a little to hot so that you are not clipping, through your mixer. Im still kinda new as well, anyone else wanna add on to this?...

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Re: GWBUSHSTEP, Almost finished need feedback

Post by particle-jim » Mon Oct 24, 2011 9:27 am

elyhess wrote:also, which parts do you recommend adding sub bass to? the melody part? or the drop parts?
ermm... the bassline?

if the bassline aint got sub then it aint dubstep, simple as
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Re: GWBUSHSTEP, Almost finished need feedback

Post by jarvis89 » Mon Oct 24, 2011 11:44 am

ReachZenith wrote:Well you would just limit certain sounds, that are coming through a little to hot so that you are not clipping, through your mixer. Im still kinda new as well, anyone else wanna add on to this?...
no, you would typically add a limiter to your master output track once your ready to render the track, i would leave it bypassed or turned off while you're working on the track though. I use voxengo elephant.
you're correct in saying the limiter will stop anything from clipping by reducing anything that clips (goes above 0db) back down to 0db. But the important thing it does is it makes your track a lot louder.

sub bass is very important in dubstep, do some googling on sub bass techniques etc. you need it underneath all your basslines.

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