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dark shizzle-8 bit pressure

Post by 8bitwonder » Wed Mar 22, 2006 11:15 pm

pressure pressure pressure

anyone feeling this track called ----bit fter---

on the tunes page only 16k please help

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Re: dark shizzle-8 bit pressure

Post by 8bitwonder » Thu Mar 23, 2006 8:03 am

8bitwonder wrote:pressure pressure pressure

anyone feeling this track called ----bit fter---

on the tunes page only 16k please help
feedback?

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Post by 2000f » Thu Mar 23, 2006 11:57 am

Yeah, actually feeling the vibe of the tune, eventhough it´s rather short. However, I reckon the mix needs slight improvents to make it stand out:

The drums, especially the snare, seemd to lack punch and clarity, and maybe vene some reverb. I really like the intro chords, however it´s way too short and the bridhe from intro to the "main groove/beat" is to simple. In general I think the transitions over all needs some more work/details.
But I actually think this tune could turn out very good. The bassline and the general mood is cool!
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Post by 8bitwonder » Thu Mar 23, 2006 12:15 pm

2000F wrote:Yeah, actually feeling the vibe of the tune, eventhough it´s rather short. However, I reckon the mix needs slight improvents to make it stand out:

The drums, especially the snare, seemd to lack punch and clarity, and maybe vene some reverb. I really like the intro chords, however it´s way too short and the bridhe from intro to the "main groove/beat" is to simple. In general I think the transitions over all needs some more work/details.
But I actually think this tune could turn out very good. The bassline and the general mood is cool!
thank you kindly

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Post by lucky_strike » Thu Mar 23, 2006 2:26 pm

this is huge!

awesome vocal in the intro!

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Post by threnody » Thu Mar 23, 2006 7:12 pm

okay listening. like this one. maybe pitch the vocal up or down, it sounds a bit strange. nice beat tho and nice bass. good sections as well. i like the keys on the intro but am not so into the other tremelo synth sound.

sounds v promising!
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Post by acetone » Thu Mar 23, 2006 7:59 pm

I really feel the beat and the bass, but the intro and vocal seem a bit 'off' somehow… I think it has the potential to become a real killer. Maybe if the track was a bit more focused on the groove.

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