dramax - One Day I Smile (Dubstep/Juke/138BPM) (WIP)

[dramax]

Soundcloud

Hello guys,
I'm pretty new to making beats and this track which I made most of yesterday is not really similar to the stuff I usually make (more on the deep side), but I would be really happy if I could get some feedback. It's not mastered so you should probably turn your speakers up a bit.

I know the vocal sample could use some work, but what exactly would you suggest to make it fit better with the rest of the track? Or should I get rid of it?
Another thing is the sub coming in for the first time at about 1.07, when the kicks are pitched up. I think it is not audible enough, but maybe that's just my speakers... Any suggestions how I could make it stand out more?

I would be glad to post a 320 when the song is finished (and if someone wants one).

Thanks in advance!

[dramax]

No one? You don't have to post a lot, but it would be really nice to know if I'm on the right way.

[jclarkeiv]

I like what you are doing there, feedback on your soundcloud.

[dramax]

Thank you very much. I will play around with editing the vocals and maybe add/change some sounds and post a new version soon.