Arnolfini - F.A.M.E (feat TG)

Arnolfini · Post by **Arnolfini** » Thu Nov 17, 2011 11:33 pm

New grime track... well.. my first grime track haha.
let me know what you think!
thanks
Chris

Soundcloud

Riich · Post by **Riich** » Fri Nov 18, 2011 2:19 am

nice for a first grime track! idk it seems like the rapping is off or something.

and i think you should make it fade in with beginning, that beginning synth is a little harsh.

I like your main bassline tho, its pretty tight man.

can you tell me what you think of my track in the link below?
http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=225006

Arnolfini · Post by **Arnolfini** » Fri Nov 18, 2011 11:44 am

thanks man, yeah i did notice that after the mc had left :/ still were gonna be doing another track together soon, so ill make sure its tight

thanks for the feedback though

AirRake · Post by **AirRake** » Sat Nov 19, 2011 9:13 am

chill tune dude, only thing i would say is the vocals are a little consistant. If you added a nice long break in between the verses it would create some suspense or tension making it less conistant. Nice track though dude keep it up!

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