Bond Problems- Skript (Alienation EP)

[joelalich]

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[joelalich]

BUMP, please leave some feedback!

[dj_artery]

Hiya mate, hope your well.

Mix terms - I feel this production has a long way to go.

I personally wouldn't have the drums come in as they have in the intro only to disapear and their far to busy in the chorus - I would remove the double pedalling. I don't use them myself but it sounds like your using MIDI drums?

I do think it has potential - for me @1:27-1:40 think it's a very nice riff idea only I would remove the last high pitched synth sound @1:30 and 33 and have it the same as the last note or a semitone above the last. Not too sure about the melody @1:42, but thats my opinion

Love the synth @2:55, for me the fading out @3:06 should be brought right before the drop (maybe sweep/low pass it) to glue the intro and the drop together.

The low mid 'beep' on every 2 and 4 beat needs to come down considerably for my liking. Would like to hear a more snappy snare sound - the current one seems to 'muddy' up the mix.

Hope this helps?

Kind regards,

DJ Artery

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[joelalich]

thanks for the feedback, its hard to do any of that accurately with garageband..

[xstatic]

don't use garage band.

[andrehines]

sounds promising. I would prefer the drums to be a bit more hard hitting. maybe do some more layering. overall good job

[joelalich]

thanks!