Opie - The Steel City [Burial / Phaeleh style dubstep]

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circusjam
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Opie - The Steel City [Burial / Phaeleh style dubstep]

Post by circusjam » Thu Dec 01, 2011 10:22 pm



HELLO DSF! This is my new track "The Steel City" (inspired by the great city of Sheffield!)
Please listen and enjoy. If your expecting big wobbles and dirty bass then dont press play, as neither are included. Anyway, if you like this please share around, i need more followers! If you like it please follow me on soundcloud too: Soundcloud

Also please LIKE my facebook page: http://www.facebook.com/pages/Opie/1143 ... 53?sk=wall

Even if you dont like the track, like the page anyway coz it makes me look famous. :lol:

Cheers and big ups to everyone on DSF.

Peace. :Q:

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jeanblanc
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Re: Opie - The Steel City [Burial / Phaeleh style dubstep]

Post by jeanblanc » Fri Dec 02, 2011 11:23 am

This is good, particularly like the beats. Cool ambience in general and the vocals give the tune a haunting quality. I would maybe suggest that you try to progress the track further as it develops, perhaps adding something extra to add urgency to the beats or increase the tempo of the melodic elements (I don't mean increase the BPM). Hope this helps, keep up the good work

accordionfan
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Re: Opie - The Steel City [Burial / Phaeleh style dubstep]

Post by accordionfan » Fri Dec 02, 2011 11:32 am

your music is good
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circusjam
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Re: Opie - The Steel City [Burial / Phaeleh style dubstep]

Post by circusjam » Sat Dec 03, 2011 11:08 am

jeanblanc wrote:This is good, particularly like the beats. Cool ambience in general and the vocals give the tune a haunting quality. I would maybe suggest that you try to progress the track further as it develops, perhaps adding something extra to add urgency to the beats or increase the tempo of the melodic elements (I don't mean increase the BPM). Hope this helps, keep up the good work
Cheers bro, yeah I think I'm gonna maybe give it a quick rework, it is pretty short, only 3 mins! I'll see what I can do :W:

Peace.

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