oner51 - cage / mean [dark/bass/minimal/dungeon]

[fiveone]

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a new one i'm nearing completion.

EDIT:

rather put the other track in the same topic to avoid spamming... so here's another.

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what do you guys think? any comments good or otherwise are definitely appreciated, and of course fb4fb will be honoured. safe!

[Dyssomnia]

Wow, this one's really sick!
I love the bass, sounds really organic!
Make sure to hit me up with a 320 once you've completed this one, mate!

[fiveone]

will do bud.

anymore comments guys?

[fiveone]

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[oprs]

this is fucking raw man.
did not expect that with the intro the way it was. need a couple more elements but thats my opinion its still good.

[fiveone]

thanks mate. any more comments? fb4fb!

[fiveone]

aw man, sucks when you comment on other peoples tracks and it looks like fb4fb doesn't work all that well with some people!

ah well, i've got a new one up as well as "cage" still being up on my soundcloud, here's an unfinished demo of "mean", check it >>>

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all feedback appreciated good or otherwise, and fb4fb will be honoured of course. safe!

[dullatron]

Mixes sound really promising but I think the intros are really "random" in a way. in a way that nothing really happens and you just wait for the drop instead of anticipating it. I think the main issue is just how you build your elements in to your song. Just keep working on your productions and stuff will happen Also, watch out for too much ultra hi's in the hi-hats on mean. sounded a bit too much at some point, kind of loses the 3D:ness of the whole mix. Hope this helps any!

/Panu

ps. if you want to check out my stuff, www.soundcloud.com/dullatron , you can there.