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NICORISONE
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by NICORISONE » Tue Jan 10, 2012 4:55 pm
Soundcloud
This is a new project of mine with my good friend Joey Virrueta.
We do not have any sort of genre we are going for, we are simply just creating music.
Would love some feedback on this

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vyvyan
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by vyvyan » Wed Jan 11, 2012 10:00 pm
I like the atomsphere and ideas, instruments and eveything, but there is something missing to make it a great track to my point of view. This is a good track for sure, but... I don't know, maybe more plays in the kicks and rythms, on the bass...
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Jackknife
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- Location: Phoenix, Arizona, United States
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by Jackknife » Thu Jan 12, 2012 8:23 am
Dig the atmosphere, just need some more low end and like he said above a bit more play with the drums and the rhythm.
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UBLF
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- Location: South Carolina
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by UBLF » Thu Jan 12, 2012 3:55 pm
This tune gives me hope for the chillout scene. I'll go with the previous two posters and add something needs to be added. Maybe a hushed voice or whisper from a delicate lady's voice - or maybe a mellow bar or two from a bold voiced male.
I'd love to hear where this goes!
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NICORISONE
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by NICORISONE » Thu Jan 12, 2012 5:45 pm
Thanks for the feedback guys!
Little update:
-I have added a 60hz sub under the bass that is currently there (We have not mixed it down yet though)
-MY friend is currently writing lyrics and will be adding vocals soon!
-I will be working on some slight variations with the percussion (we don't want to do much as we don't want the percussion to be focused on that much)
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Shaion
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- Location: Estonia
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by Shaion » Sun Mar 11, 2012 5:50 pm
An amazing flow in this track. Though it seems there's a synth with massive distortion on it. I wonder how it would sound without that. Not saying it's bad as it is, just a curious idea. Overall, the soundscape is insanely good, I really like that track so far. Keep up the great work, guys!
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KoenDercksen
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by KoenDercksen » Sun Mar 11, 2012 8:22 pm
YES NEEDS FEMALE VOCALS!!!!! Haha that would make this seriously amazing.
Loving it, keep going! Following you for sure.
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