obZen - Catch me ( Dark, Minimal )

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obZen - Catch me ( Dark, Minimal )

Post by obzen » Sun Mar 04, 2012 3:20 pm

Hey guys, here is the latest track i've made on a dark ambient vibe :)
Feedback is always appreciated ! :corndance:
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Re: obZen - Catch me ( Dark, Minimal )

Post by obzen » Sun Mar 04, 2012 8:41 pm

bump :H:
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Re: obZen - Catch me ( Dark, Minimal )

Post by Hircine » Sun Mar 04, 2012 8:44 pm

aren't those vocals from a high rankin sample pack? anyway, lose then, a bit more of reverb on the hats and play with the velocity so you get more groovy dynamics. Then I'd be able to say that I actually liked that tune.
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Re: obZen - Catch me ( Dark, Minimal )

Post by obzen » Sun Mar 04, 2012 8:57 pm

Thanks for the feedback mate! Yeah I completely agree about the hats now you mentioned it. I'll sort that tomoro with a fresh pair of ears.
So you think I should lose the vocals completely? I personally like the vocals lol
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Re: obZen - Catch me ( Dark, Minimal )

Post by xstatic » Sun Mar 04, 2012 9:41 pm

nice tune. feelin the sub movement. really pulls at you
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Re: obZen - Catch me ( Dark, Minimal )

Post by el-tel » Mon Mar 05, 2012 2:47 pm

nice overall sound...
dont see why you cant use the samples, if it works well, why not?
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Re: obZen - Catch me ( Dark, Minimal )

Post by JamieSky » Mon Mar 05, 2012 9:49 pm

I have fallen in love with this tune man, brilliant work.I personally think the vocals work quite well, although I think they might sound better when playing around with a low pass filter. However it's only an idea and may actually sound terrible lol.
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Re: obZen - Catch me ( Dark, Minimal )

Post by obzen » Tue Mar 06, 2012 12:08 am

Cheers mate :) do you mean try cutting some of the lower frequencies to give it a more distant eery feel? If you want a 320 let me know man
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Re: obZen - Catch me ( Dark, Minimal )

Post by Electric_Head » Tue Mar 06, 2012 5:48 am

Solid tune, nice thick bass and well used reverbs.
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Re: obZen - Catch me ( Dark, Minimal )

Post by obzen » Tue Mar 06, 2012 2:16 pm

Thanks mate. Deffinatly need to add a touch of verb and adjust the velocities of the hats I recon!
I produce on headphones and after listening through my mates system it sounds as though the vocals are a little to loud. Can someone with studio monitors give me some feedback on levels please? Thanks
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