RILLA - Victims (Dark, Deep, dubstep)

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RILLA - Victims (Dark, Deep, dubstep)

Post by RILLADUBZ » Mon Mar 05, 2012 2:22 pm

Hey, Guys!

Take a listen to this track. Follow. Comment. Share. All support and feedback is highly appreciated! I'm open to speaking with any producer or anyone who enjoys my music. So, on my soundcloud is my facebook link. Feel free to give me an add. I try my hardest not to ignore anyone! Look forward to networking! Cheers and enjoy!
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el-tel
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Re: RILLA - Victims (Dark, Deep, dubstep)

Post by el-tel » Mon Mar 05, 2012 2:29 pm

nice tune, some good ideas
the first drop seems to come in too quickly and you could add a bit more beef to the bass after 1:25.
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Re: RILLA - Victims (Dark, Deep, dubstep)

Post by RILLADUBZ » Mon Mar 05, 2012 2:34 pm

el-tel wrote:nice tune, some good ideas
the first drop seems to come in too quickly and you could add a bit more beef to the bass.


Hey thanks for the feedback! But, I'm not exactly sure what you mean. You said the first drop comes in to quick? This is a clip of the first drop only of the over all track. Do you see where I'm a little confused? Thanks for the feedback how ever! If you don't mind explaining though I would take into consideration re-editing before doing a release with the track on a label.
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Re: RILLA - Victims (Dark, Deep, dubstep)

Post by jaydot » Mon Mar 05, 2012 2:35 pm

feeling it, snare is a tad quiet but apart from that...
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Re: RILLA - Victims (Dark, Deep, dubstep)

Post by RILLADUBZ » Mon Mar 05, 2012 2:37 pm

jaydot wrote:feeling it, snare is a tad quiet but apart from that...

Well listening to these track you just posted Bruv I like the vibes I'll check out your sound cloud and thanks for the feedback.
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Re: RILLA - Victims (Dark, Deep, dubstep)

Post by el-tel » Mon Mar 05, 2012 2:50 pm

RILLADUBZ wrote:
el-tel wrote:nice tune, some good ideas
the first drop seems to come in too quickly and you could add a bit more beef to the bass.


Hey thanks for the feedback! But, I'm not exactly sure what you mean. You said the first drop comes in to quick? This is a clip of the first drop only of the over all track. Do you see where I'm a little confused? Thanks for the feedback how ever! If you don't mind explaining though I would take into consideration re-editing before doing a release with the track on a label.
i mean at 0:56, its like the beats drop in before the build up is finnished
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Re: RILLA - Victims (Dark, Deep, dubstep)

Post by Electric_Head » Tue Mar 06, 2012 5:51 am

nice sounding track
I feel the midrange over the top needs to change up more.
Or drop it through the track to give an empty vibe.
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