NEW dubstep remix need feedback

[OWaLLiiN]

New dubstep remix of Chase and status - Time ,, need some feedback please tell me what you think!

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[juan]

I like the intro, its a little long but im into relaxing intros. The drop is sick, super melodic, maybe just add a ride on the drop 4/4. but thats just me.

Good vibes mayn

[shroomhead1]

I like the chord progression a lot.good synthwork and the mix is nice, clean and roomy. It's a minimal Dubstep tune still i think some top end drums (cymbals ) wouldn't hurt this track, also I'm a big fan of variation so I tend to suggest more drum fills. The first build up seems to long for the soft and soothing drop in my ears- I'd suggest it being half as long or some more mid range and glitched up sound in the first breakdown, because the longer the buildup the more I get excited about what's going to happen in the drop and the more I hope it's really a unique idea that you can't scare your listeners away with after the first 32 beats. This breakdown you have however fits the feel of the track completely, I was expecting this drop or a similar drop just after 32 beats, the rest of the build up I was more and more expecting a "wilder" drop, maybe the same bass sound with syncopation and stabs and pitch slides and everything, maybe some glitchy effects and some solo elements... enough about structure, to melodic variation and rhythm. I'd suggest building in some 16 bar melody (like the the feel of the second breakdown) that does not start offbeat, since all of your lead sounds already fill the off beat sector pretty well yet the higher frequency range still needs a little more to keep my attention. And the snareclap seems drowned in the huge top end atmosphere of the breakdowns, you might want to give it more presence. So let's summarize: 1.more mid range please/ less intro please, 2.higher frequency percussion please, 3.variation drum-wise please, 4-non offbeat Melody please, 5.Snareclap presence please. Overall nice work man, kick and sub go well together. I'm watching this grow. If you want to return the feed here's some Glitch Hop I made: http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=238905

[OWaLLiiN]

Thanks for the answer! I really appreciate the tips and i will keep it in mind! Thank's for such a quick answer and i really like your songs shroomhead1 the glitch hop koan sound inspired is epic keep doing what ur doing!