Layko - Pickle Pig (feedback needed)

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LaykoDubstep
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Layko - Pickle Pig (feedback needed)

Post by LaykoDubstep » Fri Mar 30, 2012 1:24 am

Soundcloud

Not done quite yet, just wondering how i'm doing. closest thing i've had to something completed in a long time. tell me what you think, thanks. :)

felixWBO
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Re: Layko - Pickle Pig (feedback needed)

Post by felixWBO » Fri Mar 30, 2012 2:59 pm

I think the synths could do with a bit more processing, the beats a bit straight as well needs more of a shuffle methinks

LaykoDubstep
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Re: Layko - Pickle Pig (feedback needed)

Post by LaykoDubstep » Fri Mar 30, 2012 6:18 pm

alright. thanks man, was gonna add more to the beat soon i think

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eldoogle
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Re: Layko - Pickle Pig (feedback needed)

Post by eldoogle » Fri Mar 30, 2012 10:54 pm

Turn down the synth at .44

Snare is not coming through enough, lower the volume of other elements, or sidechain the bass with the snare, or boost the snare at around 15khz.

Also the song as a whole doesn't flow normally, but that's your decision. Needs variation, like a octave or two higher synth the plays every 4th bar or so to break it up.

It also needs transitions from one part to another.

At 3.12 it could have ended.

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