Thirteen - Notice This? (Rough dubstep)

[ThirteenNL]

Soundcloud

Check out my new tune, 'Notice This?'! I'll be giving this one out for free once my Fanpage hits 200 likes, so drop me a like if you dig the tune!
If you think it still needs some work, feedback is very, very welcome!

Few other dubs on my Soundcloud as well, comments are well appreciated.

Easy,

Julian // Thirteen

[agus69]

Your beats are the fucking TITS!! Send me your stuff and I'll do the same. I'm following you on SC, do the same and keep on rockin'

[elyhess]

I love the vocals! also really sick ass bassline, if i were to do anything, i might add some higher notes of some sort, what you have is fucking amazing in itself, doesnt really even need the highs, but if you were to put them it, could be cool. just an idea! Keep dat shit up

[ThirteenNL]

thanks guys! I'll hit you up tomorrow agus. Love your new bit too btw, awesome work!

Thanks Ely, also for the comments on soundcloud What do you mean exactly with higher notes? The stabs have quite alot of highs already and there's also the 'alarm' sound filling up the spectrum, let me know!

Easy

[elyhess]

thanks guys! I'll hit you up tomorrow agus. Love your new bit too btw, awesome work!

Thanks Ely, also for the comments on soundcloud What do you mean exactly with higher notes? The stabs have quite alot of highs already and there's also the 'alarm' sound filling up the spectrum, let me know!

Easy

As i'm re-listening i see what your saying. This track is dope as hell, im not really sure what other advice i could give, as i am still learning too ^-^.
I can only really offer one suggestion, and it will either sound like shit, or it will sound really cool! Recently i've been downloading tons of acapellas and chopping them up so that you get a bunch of really small samples, and i've been making some cool highs/vocal effects that sit on top of the track.

I'm not really sure if that would add to this song or not, it may sound like complete ass! and im not sure if you want vocals in your track

But overall, i think this is really fucking sick!

EDIT: Also, was wondering if i could download this song anywhere? 320 by chance? waay sick

[ThirteenNL]

I'm giving it away for free once my facebook fanpage hits 200 likes, so get liking and sharing and you'll have it soon!

Actually a cool idea with the vocalchops, might give it a try, working on a new one too that could definitely use this.

[ThirteenNL]

Anyone else?

[TeRRo]

SICK! real vibes here!! big ups

[ThirteenNL]

Thanks

[MKRUGGER]

It's nice, but I'm not digging the drums for some reason? They flow with the song of course, but I feel like they should sit on top a bit more and punch harder!

The way the kick sits under there and flows, but still has some punch is decent, but the snare kind of just swishes across, not enough punch! I think it'd make the song sound a lot harder and bigger!

Cheers though, this song is good

[ThirteenNL]

Thanks man, I'll look into the snare!

[Mishkuh]

It's nice, but I'm not digging the drums for some reason? They flow with the song of course, but I feel like they should sit on top a bit more and punch harder!

The way the kick sits under there and flows, but still has some punch is decent, but the snare kind of just swishes across, not enough punch! I think it'd make the song sound a lot harder and bigger!

Cheers though, this song is good

I agree with you the drum should lay on top of the track to make it sound more full otherwise the drums are kind of just background noise. Dope track tho got a great vibe to it. Work on getting the kicks n snare mixed right n you will be golden big ups coach!

[Mishkuh]

It's nice, but I'm not digging the drums for some reason? They flow with the song of course, but I feel like they should sit on top a bit more and punch harder!

The way the kick sits under there and flows, but still has some punch is decent, but the snare kind of just swishes across, not enough punch! I think it'd make the song sound a lot harder and bigger!

Cheers though, this song is good

I agree with you the drum should lay on top of the track to make it sound more full otherwise the drums are kind of just background noise. Dope track tho got a great vibe to it. Work on getting the kicks n snare mixed right n you will be golden big ups coach!

[slaybrahamlincoln]

youre a beast bro. absolute filth. props on the buju banton too.

[ThirteenNL]

big ups for the comments guys!