Airfee - The Mist (Chill/ Dark)

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Airfee - The Mist (Chill/ Dark)

Post by AirFee » Mon May 21, 2012 8:38 am

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Yeah my new tune, if anyone has any opinions or feedback that would be great

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Re: Airfee - The Mist (Chill/ Dark)

Post by Riddles » Mon May 21, 2012 9:37 am

its very repetitive and the percussion isnt particularly exciting so it gets quite monotonous. like the ideas, just try and mix it up a bit with your percussion etc
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Re: Airfee - The Mist (Chill/ Dark)

Post by AirFee » Mon May 21, 2012 10:44 am

Ok cheers :P

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Re: Airfee - The Mist (Chill/ Dark)

Post by Electric_Head » Mon May 21, 2012 10:57 am

Nice ideas and a good vibe to the track.
I have to agree with Riddles on the percussion though.
It needs some sort of change up to make it less monotonous.
I`m not big on the 2nd section duplicating the 1st.
I`ve always felt a different beat structure or a varied idea within the same structure is essential to keep the listener interested.
Even a simple hat on the off-beat could add major character.
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Re: Airfee - The Mist (Chill/ Dark)

Post by AirFee » Mon May 21, 2012 11:01 am

Ok yeah thanks ill get onto that

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