Hanging On (Talált Remix) [Melodic/Chill Dubstep]

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Hanging On (Talált Remix) [Melodic/Chill Dubstep]

Post by Talált » Wed May 30, 2012 4:21 am

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hey guys, new to the forum. I decided i should start posting my songs on some forums to get feedback, etc. so check this one out and if you like it, take a listen to some of my other tracks on soundcloud.com/sr20dream

oh and this one is a free 320kbps mp3 btw

thanks for listening =]
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Post by Talált » Wed May 30, 2012 4:25 pm

bump for some possible feedback
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Re: Blake - Hanging On (Talált Remix) [Alt/Melodic Dubstep]

Post by OfficialDAPT » Wed May 30, 2012 5:32 pm

Talált wrote:bump for some possible feedback
Nice and chill i love it.
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Re: Hanging On (Talált Remix) [Melodic/Chill Dubstep]

Post by Talált » Wed May 30, 2012 8:01 pm

thanks! glad to hear you liked it
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Re: Blake - Hanging On (Talált Remix) [Alt/Melodic Dubstep]

Post by OfficialDAPT » Wed May 30, 2012 8:28 pm

Talált wrote:bump for some possible feedback
It's not rlly feedback but half the people here just want praise so I thought I'd help you out. :corndance:
7 year old BROstep/Trapstep/Chillstep producer from India. Young. Talented. 7 Years Old. Super skilled for age. Signed to NOW22. Biography written in 3rd person on soundcloud OBVI. The next Skrillex. Wait I don't even like him anymore LOL. Super talented. Only 6 years old.

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Re: Hanging On (Talált Remix) [Melodic/Chill Dubstep]

Post by Talált » Thu May 31, 2012 4:48 am

yeah honestly yeah lol i'm putting out feelers. personally I love my music but I'm looking out to see how other people feel about it now. so thanks!
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Re: Hanging On (Talált Remix) [Melodic/Chill Dubstep]

Post by Talált » Fri Jun 01, 2012 8:02 am

bump lof#1
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Re: Hanging On (Talált Remix) [Melodic/Chill Dubstep]

Post by topmo3 » Fri Jun 01, 2012 9:30 am

well personally i hate it. this must be the 1001th time that chord progression is used, in dubstep alone. i don't like the particular snare sample but the drum pattern is okay and although it sounds like you had recorded this playing out with an iphone and then put that recording up, i can tell the mixdown is decent. i don't like the vocals or the piano at all, but i guess that's not your fault because this is a remix and my guess is those are the original song parts? and i don't know why this is chill?
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Re: Hanging On (Talált Remix) [Melodic/Chill Dubstep]

Post by Talált » Fri Jun 01, 2012 6:07 pm

jeez man i agree with everything you said there! i loved this song when I made it but slowly started to hate it because of the simple ass age old chord progression. i HATE that snare sample too, lately i've been working alot with layering samples to get something unique. i hate the vocals effect too as well and maybe even his voice without the effect but to be honest, this song was a big lesson in structuring for me. so long as i walk away from this song with new knowledge, then I am happy with what it is.

thanks for the great feedback man! =]
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Re: Hanging On (Talált Remix) [Melodic/Chill Dubstep]

Post by Talált » Mon Jun 04, 2012 4:20 am

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Re: Hanging On (Talált Remix) [Melodic/Chill Dubstep]

Post by Talált » Mon Jun 04, 2012 7:30 pm

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Re: Hanging On (Talált Remix) [Melodic/Chill Dubstep]

Post by CVRS » Mon Jun 04, 2012 7:55 pm

I love the vocals and the piano chords! I'm really fond of this chill dubstep.
Check out my track too if you like, I make house music.

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Re: Hanging On (Talált Remix) [Melodic/Chill Dubstep]

Post by Talált » Mon Jun 04, 2012 8:31 pm

thank you! i'd love to listen to your track though, looking forward to seeing it on this board soon. thanks for listening!
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Re: Hanging On (Talált Remix) [Melodic/Chill Dubstep]

Post by Talált » Sat Jun 16, 2012 4:20 am

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Re: Hanging On (Talált Remix) [Melodic/Chill Dubstep]

Post by Electric_Head » Sat Jun 16, 2012 7:12 am

You need some serious work on the mixdown.
There's no real impact on any hits.
The drum seems expanded too far into the stereo field.
Repetitive melody.

It is however a bit better than some of the tunes posted on this board.
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Re: Hanging On (Talált Remix) [Melodic/Chill Dubstep]

Post by almostskate100 » Sat Jun 16, 2012 11:29 am

topmo3 wrote:well personally i hate it. this must be the 1001th time that chord progression is used, in dubstep alone. i don't like the particular snare sample but the drum pattern is okay and although it sounds like you had recorded this playing out with an iphone and then put that recording up, i can tell the mixdown is decent. i don't like the vocals or the piano at all, but i guess that's not your fault because this is a remix and my guess is those are the original song parts? and i don't know why this is chill?
Honestly, I didn't even listen to the OP's track yet (i'll try to get around to it tomorrow and post some feedback), but this comment was just beyond harsh. Who the hell starts out criticism with "i hate it"? This is why this part of DSF is generally just useless.

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Re: Hanging On (Talált Remix) [Melodic/Chill Dubstep]

Post by Talált » Tue Jun 19, 2012 5:25 am

i took his criticism well, i believe. i didn't think much of it other than what was worth taking from what he said. but regardless, thanks for the feedback on the mix. it's been a while since i made this song and as each day goes by i can tell more and more how crappy this is. not to mention i went back and re-mixed it according to what other people were saying. and i may have overdone a few parts, when it was probably good the way I had it. but nonetheless, thanks!
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