Light Stories - One More Time (dark)

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Re: Light Stories - One More Time (dark)

Post by wub » Fri Jun 01, 2012 7:25 am

Was loving the vibes on this intro even before the Kelis sample came in...excellent use of the vocal snippet...and intro a Basement Jaxx sample as well, nice. The drums under this all are nice, but the percussion hats seem a bit piercing and are sitting noticeably up in the mix above everything else. Kick snare is plenty of weight, but the programming feels a bit static and repetitive.

From about 2m45s on, the tune seems just to repeat itself over...maybe add some variety for the last half in terms of programming or elements to keep the interest.

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Re: Light Stories - One More Time (dark)

Post by JTreeZY » Fri Jun 01, 2012 7:35 am

I like it.. wouldnt really call it dark though. I'd like some more bass but it could be my shitty headphones

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Re: Light Stories - One More Time (dark)

Post by Talált » Fri Jun 01, 2012 7:52 am

idk, your mix sounds good on my end, no piercing hi hats here. if you think you want more bass add a little more bass.
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Re: Light Stories - One More Time (dark)

Post by bassbum » Fri Jun 01, 2012 9:52 am

Nice track.

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Re: Light Stories - One More Time (dark)

Post by Light-Stories » Fri Jun 01, 2012 12:55 pm

@ wub I might add some variation to the drums and a new bass pattern after the breakdown. Its cool thos how you recognised both of the sampels even know there like 3 words long.

@JtreeZY Its a dark track for me, I normally make brostep. I could use more bass.

@Talált Thanks im happy with the mix.

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