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joshw5286
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Bish Bosh Slice

Post by joshw5286 » Fri Jun 08, 2012 3:45 pm

Something different for me. Need feedback :)

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Re: Bish Bosh Slice

Post by wub » Sat Jun 09, 2012 7:52 am

Really interesting intro with those drums, but then the midrange arrives and it loses it's vibe. From then on it's just a load of bass patches having a fight...doesn't reallly do anything for me.
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Re: Bish Bosh Slice

Post by joshw5286 » Sat Jun 09, 2012 9:38 pm

thats exactly what i wanted it to sound like! :)
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Re: Bish Bosh Slice

Post by ehbes » Sat Jun 09, 2012 9:49 pm

joshw5286 wrote:thats exactly what i wanted it to sound like! :)
he's saying it doesn't work well
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Re: Bish Bosh Slice

Post by TeRRo » Sat Jun 09, 2012 10:32 pm

I liked it! The track is not much as a whole but you nailed the bass perfectly imo. Awesome rhythms and midrange sounds, but take some advice from what Wub said. Keep it up man!
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Re: Bish Bosh Slice

Post by joshw5286 » Sun Jun 10, 2012 3:14 pm

thanx man
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Re: Bish Bosh Slice

Post by lloydy » Sun Jun 10, 2012 5:34 pm

Intro drums are quality,love the way the vibe rolls film score samples by any chance?
I have to agree with wub on the midrange stuff but must say its better than a lot of the shit that gets posted and has some type of rhythm about it.
Sound design is pretty tight and i like the way you try to get the bass to sort if mesh in with the beats,it does fit the groove.
Bit short and not a lot of variation in the arrangement but i'm going to presume this is a wip?
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Re: Bish Bosh Slice

Post by joshw5286 » Mon Jun 11, 2012 4:39 pm

yess, you are the first to realise its a wip :p
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Re: Bish Bosh Slice

Post by zerbaman » Mon Jun 11, 2012 10:26 pm

This isn't bad imo, nice sound design man
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Re: Bish Bosh Slice

Post by ehbes » Tue Jun 12, 2012 12:09 am

joshw5286 wrote:yess, you are the first to realise its a wip :p
wips don't go in this thread thats why
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Re: Bish Bosh Slice

Post by joshw5286 » Tue Jun 12, 2012 1:38 am

its tunes for feedback? get feedback and improve the track ini
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