Toby Dwinger - Plans Within Plans (Deep/Minimal)

[Toby_Dwinger]

Hi people!

I wrote this tune a couple of months ago and would appreciate some feedback. It's a low bitrate version as I'm hoping to get it released at some point.

Soundcloud

[wub]

The reverb tail on the snare ends very abruptly, bit jarring in places. Liking the pads and synth interplay, weaves together nicely. Tune gets a bit repetitive from 3m43s onwards, like it's the same ideas being run through again.

Mixdown is nice, snare aside.

[Toby_Dwinger]

Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated. The reverb on the snare was intentional. It cuts off just as the kick hits. If it doesn't work for you that's cool

[alpz]

Sounds sick man, nice job.

[Toby_Dwinger]

Thanks alpz, much appreciated. Listened to your tune too and am really liking it. My friend would love a 320 copy of that!

[Slim Dubs]

Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated. The reverb on the snare was intentional. It cuts off just as the kick hits. If it doesn't work for you that's cool

I know what he means about the snare. Zomby does the same in Spliff Dub (the original remix, not any of the remix remixes) but that just adds to the tune, I enjoy your snare. In fact it's almost identical. Sounding tight man, and the mix down is legit.

[Toby_Dwinger]

Thanks mate, loving Ripples too. I'm cool with wub not liking the snare, music is very much a matter of opinion, and what works for one man doesn't necessarily work for another!

[alpz]

Thanks alpz, much appreciated. Listened to your tune too and am really liking it. My friend would love a 320 copy of that!

Soundcloud download is a 320, enjoy. :>

[zerbaman]

put an actual reverb on the snare or change it.

[zerbaman]

That being said, With that pad, you could make some really funky stuff man, pretty inspirational listen man.

[Toby_Dwinger]

put an actual reverb on the snare or change it.

I'm afraid the snare stays! Like I said earlier, it was intentional. I'm happy with the snare, for me it works

[ramses020]

Like it, the track has got a nice flow. I only think the twisted reece sounds a bit too harsh in relation in the 1:38-2:03 part of the track, it works well in the part right after though.

[Toby_Dwinger]

Like it, the track has got a nice flow. I only think the twisted reece sounds a bit too harsh in relation in the 1:38-2:03 part of the track, it works well in the part right after though.

Could be something to do with it only being a 128kbps mixdown perhaps? Actually, thinking about it, it could be only 96kbps - I don't remember, and deleted the file after uploading it to SoundCloud!

[zerbaman]

Just out of curiosity, are you sending 320s around?

[Toby_Dwinger]

Just out of curiosity, are you sending 320s around?

If you'd like a 320 PM me your email address