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With Maps - Like Waves

Post by WITHMAPS » Sun Jun 10, 2012 7:28 pm

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Re: With Maps - Like Waves

Post by daeMTHAFKNkim » Sun Jun 10, 2012 8:44 pm

I really like this. Sick tune man! It reminds me of Nero/Chronic Future/Linkin Park mixed and blended together.

All the sounds you used go perfect together, good melodies also.
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Re: With Maps - Like Waves

Post by ehbes » Sun Jun 10, 2012 9:12 pm

that phasing in the beginning is terrible...might wanna sort that out

lead seems to be fine not muddy

the pad seems to be drowning the vocal a little but not too too bad, just make sure the vocal is mono

kick and snare are sitting well, hats seemed drowned

ok its starting to get repetitive around 2 minute mark. give me something new..

besides from it getting horrifically repetitive it sounds good, but you NEED to introduce something new into it
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Re: With Maps - Like Waves

Post by WITHMAPS » Sun Jun 10, 2012 9:15 pm

ehbrums1 wrote:that phasing in the beginning is terrible...might wanna sort that out

lead seems to be fine not muddy

the pad seems to be drowning the vocal a little but not too too bad, just make sure the vocal is mono

kick and snare are sitting well, hats seemed drowned

ok its starting to get repetitive around 2 minute mark. give me something new..

besides from it getting horrifically repetitive it sounds good, but you NEED to introduce something new into it
I do agree with some of these statements. Tough part is getting my partner to agree to some changes.

The instrumental is purposely repetitive which I know will obv get old for most people.

I appreciate the feedback very much tho!

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Re: With Maps - Like Waves

Post by ehbes » Sun Jun 10, 2012 9:20 pm

one thing i would do is for the drop just add in a nice big sub and interesting perc's, done right it'll breathe new life into it whilst not interrupting the flow you already have
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