Yellowire - Tonight is the Night RMX - Feedback returned

[klass]

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So here's another remix I did for some remix competition.
I don't know much about the band really, but i'm diggin this remix haha
lemme know what you think, feedback appreciated and returned

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[ehbes]

your drop needs a sub bass

[klass]

Yeah good call man, I just did this track yesterday, still gotta let it sink in, but word good looks on the feedback.
feeling the track you posted, i'm diggin how it comes in, reminds me of clockwork orange, and thats a good thing.
spice up those drums those, some variations in the pattern and drops would go along way, maybe some automation and eq'ing on some of the instruments too, to create that anticipation.

[klass]

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[Blazer]

Loving the intro, the slow and creeping growl is pretty sick haha, and yeah I agree with what was said above, it needs some heavy sub to 'fill it out' a bit, it'll make it feel heavier and thicker. Good stuff man!

[dubby_rdam]

Nasty growl at the start of the track! I love how it's pitch bends.

Good use of the vocal.

The drop may have been a bit heavier. The wobble is ok, nothing extraordinary.

Cool how the beat changes and the bridge type section of the track. Makes is all a bit more interesting.

Loving the synths too.

Overall: it is a decent track, but it has no element that really pops out for me that makes it really interesing.

Cheers

[BryceFury]

Agreeing with everyone about the Sub, but other than that this is sick, synths are nice. Middle breakdown works well too.

[klass]

Thanks for the feedback guys. I'm a hip hop producer, been doing that for over 10 years and only got into electronic music this past year.
So I appreciate the feedback, its an everyday process getting better and mastering electronic music production.

@blazer - that track is intense, kinda nightmarish, which is dope, my critique tho would be to have a part where those dub sounds
completely drop out, for a synth or just drums or something like that, to create that desire to hear that bass again, instead of shoving it
in your face 4 minutes straight, silence and space goes a long way.

@dubby_rdam - i like the build up and how it comes in, puts you in a trance and weird place in your head, which is a good thing for sure
my critique would be to have a part where the percussions really build and are going nuts, like radiohead 'king of limbs' drums style
to create more rhythm to accompany the synths. Around the midway point, the song gets a little too repetitive, so maybe a switch up there
would help.

@brycefury - thanks for the feedback man, I make my music on crappy monitors, i reaaally gotta get a sub, im just guessing in the dark with my subs alot of the time haha

[klass]

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[elyhess]

dude this shit is dope, as you said you just started it, but sub-bass, and fuckin clarity on those drums. this track is dope!!

[Seven-Three Angel]

Some pretty good transitions (not a strong point of my own), but your dub-bass itself is too unstimulating to be so unaccompanied by other, more interesting textures, so you seem to have overcompensated with other textures and sounds, leaving a rich soundscape, but without an interesting core.

Overall, not a bad track, though its more something that I would let play in the car if someone else chose it and not something that I would choose myself.

Its hard to describe how I feel about it. I guess I like it, but I'm just bothered by the fact that it seems incomplete.

And that's my feedback :3

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[outbound]

Sounding good so far, drums are a bit muddy, back to the EQ!