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eldoogle
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by eldoogle » Wed Jul 18, 2012 7:07 pm
I think you need to break up the main synth with something new, like a steady note, then a pitch bend down right before the next bar. Or anything, just add some other relief type synth to break it up a little.
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OSHIBKA
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by OSHIBKA » Thu Jul 19, 2012 2:01 am
It seems all right for the most part, but I think you could do better with the kicks/hi-hats. Vary up the kicks a little bit and it will make the track seem less robotic, I think.
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FyahFace
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by FyahFace » Sun Jul 22, 2012 12:27 am
thanks for the feedback guys i will take your advice into consideration when i finish it for this is a very rough version of what the finished product will be bu again thank you a lot for taking the time to reply
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FyahFace
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by FyahFace » Sun Jul 22, 2012 12:28 am
thanks for the feedback guys i will take your advice into consideration when i finish it for this is a very rough version of what the finished product will be but again thank you a lot for taking the time to reply

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