Micah N - Vengeance (Original Mix) (Dubstep)

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micahn325
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Micah N - Vengeance (Original Mix) (Dubstep)

Post by micahn325 » Sat Jul 21, 2012 5:37 am

Title: Vengeance (Original Mix)
Genre: Dubstep

Here is my latest track. I put a lot of time into this and would love to hear some feedback from you.

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Re: Micah N - Vengeance (Original Mix) (Dubstep)

Post by Gapminder » Sat Jul 21, 2012 12:55 pm

Like your track. I dont know if its me but I feel like the wobble is a tiiiiny bit out of sync? Could Have to do with compression though. Not sure at all.

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Re: Micah N - Vengeance (Original Mix) (Dubstep)

Post by Jeffoproductions1 » Sat Jul 21, 2012 2:49 pm

Some creepy chords there, you don't hear them much these days. I like the wobble bass you got on this.

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Re: Micah N - Vengeance (Original Mix) (Dubstep)

Post by micahn325 » Sun Jul 22, 2012 3:23 am

Gapminder wrote:Like your track. I dont know if its me but I feel like the wobble is a tiiiiny bit out of sync? Could Have to do with compression though. Not sure at all.
What Do you mean by and bit out of sync? Do you have any suggestions in what I should do to fix it? I used Ableton Live 8 to make it.

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Re: Micah N - Vengeance (Original Mix) (Dubstep)

Post by micahn325 » Sun Jul 22, 2012 4:32 pm

Would really love some more feedback and possibly suggestions. Thanks

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Re: Micah N - Vengeance (Original Mix) (Dubstep)

Post by OSHIBKA » Sun Jul 22, 2012 6:41 pm

I like the intro a lot. I agree with the guy who said the wobble sounds out of sync. It sounds a little awkward at places like 0:33-0:34 where the lead synth doesn't seem to "match" up with the wobble's beat. Also maybe it would sound better if you lower the pitch of the wobble by an octave? Since it's kind of high-pitched, and you don't want it to conflict with the pitch of the lead synth.
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Re: Micah N - Vengeance (Original Mix) (Dubstep)

Post by Gapminder » Sun Jul 22, 2012 9:16 pm

did you make your wobble with massive? I produce in ableton live 8 as well. Don't know if you want to, but if you send me your project I could try to help; I'm by no means a pro. Oh, and it would be nice if you checked out my last track called Polyphonia. Thanks! If you want to send me your project, my email is alex911_911@hotmail.com

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Re: Micah N - Vengeance (Original Mix) (Dubstep)

Post by masterchief » Mon Jul 23, 2012 1:25 am

Jeffoproductions1 wrote:Some creepy chords there, you don't hear them much these days. I like the wobble bass you got on this.
what chords?

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Re: Micah N - Vengeance (Original Mix) (Dubstep)

Post by OSHIBKA » Mon Jul 23, 2012 2:07 am

masterchief wrote:
Jeffoproductions1 wrote:Some creepy chords there, you don't hear them much these days. I like the wobble bass you got on this.
what chords?
I think he meant the stuff starting at 0:28. Though I guess they are arpeggios rather than chords.
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Re: Micah N - Vengeance (Original Mix) (Dubstep)

Post by ReAnimate » Mon Jul 23, 2012 3:38 am

If you're using Massive try tugging the lfo wave form a little to the left. That should sync it a little better. I'm not too crazy about the mid range oscillating synth. It sounds too compressed and whispery to me. I see what you're going for, I'm sure you'll get there. I would suggest using a formant along with it and drop it down really low. That should achieve a whispery kind of sound without needing to over compress it or compromise your synth with too much distortion. Well some patches sound great with a lot of distortion but some do not.

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