mean iDeaL - Prosphetic (Electro House)

[mean iDeaL]

I recently finished an Electro House track (my very first attempt at this this style) and I'm just looking for opinions and thought's on the production and general song structure/idea's. I'm really happy with how the tack came out, but I'm interested to know what other people think.

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Constructive criticism is very welcome

[zillion]

It all sounds like its constantly catching up on it self imo. sounds really off putting think its just the notes are slightly out in places.
Dont know if its intended but it just sounds lazy.

The bass line is nice and cheeky. Personally i hate electro house so i cant give great feedback but hope that helps haha..

[mean iDeaL]

That's fair enough, but thanks for listening and commenting

I think I know what you bean by the catching up critique though; a lot of this was actually played by hand, and it's been a while since I last played keyboards, so I guess I'm still a little rusty