New dubstep...Feed 4 Feed?

[Translations]

Hello im new to this forum, ive been making dubstep for about two years now and wanted to get you opinions on my latest creation....

http://soundcloud.com/translations/the- ... iginal-mix

Ill return all feedback, so post links if you have them.

[randol35]

Damn man that intro is killer! The synths in the bassline need some more crunch/thickness to them though, they sound kinda hollow. But overall, that track is pretty sick dude. Good work.

[Translations]

Thanks appreciate the comment, ill be sure to check out you music!

[PeriKardium]

Hmm.. When you have the bass riffs switch into the keys, coming back into the main bass meat sounds WAY to abrupt. Hmm.. I would glitch it more, that is have those keys be glitched in and out and bit more sparsely. Or, have the switch into the keys, but have the bass meat be glitched back into prominence. It just sounds way to abrupt for me.

After the intro beat, I feel the keys should still have a presence that gradually dies off as we get to the drop. Maybe a low pass filter or high pass? Have that drain away the key as we get closer and closer to the drop.

Now as we eave into the softer midsection I feel that the wobble that is right before that noise rise needs some work. Not in the sound, but how it just ends. Having the drum continue right to the just the first beat of that noise measure could help, it's just that the cut itself sounds to open, if you know what I mean.

Mixing is well done in my opinion, and as the other's remarked, the intro is very well done. My only gripes are with just how somethings are cut really. Overall I do like this!

And yes feed 4 feed would be nice! I am trying to get feedback but I don't know... How... Maybe it's because I am new to producing?... I'm not sure, but ya if you have time I'd appreciate it. http://soundcloud.com/perikardium/going-places