Kid Sensha - Flay (First Dub)

ellipsis... · Post by **ellipsis...** » Tue Aug 07, 2007 1:36 am

Hello all, I'm Kid Sensha, and this is a track, "Flay."

Please, go with the title, and tear me to shreds. I need to learn.

http://virb.com/1240474392407762

marsyas · Post by **marsyas** » Tue Aug 07, 2007 1:53 am

hmmmn, and the tune is where?

ellipsis... · Post by **ellipsis...** » Tue Aug 07, 2007 1:59 am

Edited. Sorry about that!

horse · Post by **horse** » Tue Aug 07, 2007 10:14 am

loving the bleepy, clicky percussion.
real emotionless, robot minmal shit

i think your bass needs some work - its not nearly weighty enoughand theres a lot of high frequencies flying around
also i would lose the vocal sample - it doesnt really add anything and doesnt suit the vibe of the track

but everything else im really liking
hit me up if and when you finish it cuz i would love to hear it

ellipsis... · Post by **ellipsis...** » Tue Aug 07, 2007 9:00 pm

Fixed the bass, removed the sample.

http://virb.com/1240474392407762

horse · Post by **horse** » Wed Aug 08, 2007 10:21 am

yeah much better - good fucking tune this mate

any chance of grabbing a 320?

ellipsis... · Post by **ellipsis...** » Wed Aug 08, 2007 11:32 pm

horse wrote:any chance of grabbing a 320?

Certainly.

I changed the mixing and the mastering, and chopped about thirty seconds off. The bass should play nice with everything else instead of pinching the mix so hard. The synth sweeps at the end are also in key, now that I've googled "music theory" and I know what key IS.

X-Zero · Post by **X-Zero** » Thu Aug 09, 2007 12:52 am

Yeah man, I'm feeling this.
I really like the way it progresses and adds more elements.
Thanks for the 320.

Hero control is a heavy tune as well.

horse · Post by **horse** » Thu Aug 09, 2007 8:46 am

Ellipsis... wrote:The synth sweeps at the end are also in key, now that I've googled "music theory" and I know what key IS.

cheers for the 320

Kid Sensha - Flay (First Dub)

Kid Sensha - Flay (First Dub)

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