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by Rappone » Thu Nov 15, 2012 5:44 am
This has the potential to be an extremely awesome track. The part after 1:30 and before the breakdown is pure class. Are those fast notes yours or are they sampled? Just curious. The critiques, and what keep it from being awesome, is the intro, dull at best. Nothing to expect, which i gotta admit makes the pop in much more of a surprise. Maybe make it darker, more mellow, smooth drums, evil progression, then drop the 1.30.
My other critique is the breakdown, empty notes, not too harmonic either. The progression wore off there, and the drums don't enter professionally, the sort of just get pushed in there. in my O the breakdown needs a major facelift. After it you pop back in with the sick notes, playing with the filter was good, but could be a LIL better, the wobbles were a perfect fit, maybe when u drop the frequency on the fast note filter higher the volume abit, but i'm writing all this coz i seriously love what was going on in alot of the track. Some great stuff. Also, maybe cutting it short would do you a favor. PROPS.