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Postby dayton » Fri Dec 07, 2012 11:19 am

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Postby Electric_Head » Fri Dec 07, 2012 12:22 pm

Good sound.
Some muffled frequencies.
But overall it sounds cool.
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Postby Nibzz » Fri Dec 07, 2012 4:51 pm

Electric_Head wrote:Good sound.
Some muffled frequencies.
But overall it sounds cool.

:z: Defo agree.

That intro is sickness man, bloody great. Love the sounds you have used, the wubs, the synths, the perc.
Aye a little more work on the mix as a whole would make this better for me.
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Postby dayton » Fri Dec 07, 2012 7:12 pm

Electric_Head wrote:Good sound.
Some muffled frequencies.
But overall it sounds cool.



thx man. you are right bout the frequencies. thats a mad problem i have within the producing process everytime ;(
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Postby dayton » Fri Dec 07, 2012 7:12 pm

Nibzz wrote:
Electric_Head wrote:Good sound.
Some muffled frequencies.
But overall it sounds cool.

:z: Defo agree.

That intro is sickness man, bloody great. Love the sounds you have used, the wubs, the synths, the perc.
Aye a little more work on the mix as a whole would make this better for me.


thx for the kinda words man! big up
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Postby wwwmoo » Sat Dec 08, 2012 1:12 am

You really want to work on not having too much going on in the same frequencies: less is usually better and gives more impact in this type of track. The drum track is pretty stale and the bassline doesn't really do the track any justice, its doing too much and not strong enough to make a big impact.

Keep up the effort and you're going to get something incredible soon
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Postby ajlaga » Sat Dec 08, 2012 5:16 am

very nice and dark man, liking it.
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Postby dayton » Sun Dec 09, 2012 11:59 am

ajlaga wrote:very nice and dark man, liking it.


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Postby dayton » Sun Dec 09, 2012 12:00 pm

wwwmoo wrote:You really want to work on not having too much going on in the same frequencies: less is usually better and gives more impact in this type of track. The drum track is pretty stale and the bassline doesn't really do the track any justice, its doing too much and not strong enough to make a big impact.

Keep up the effort and you're going to get something incredible soon


ok, appreciate the words!
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Postby dayton » Thu Dec 13, 2012 3:57 pm

any other thoughts?
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Postby wub » Fri Dec 14, 2012 12:24 pm

Dark vibes on this, had a wicked suffociation vibe about it with the clipped frequencies :D
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Postby Mitch_dubstepuk » Fri Dec 14, 2012 4:52 pm

yeh sounding nice there,everything seems to be there, have a go at what i said and let me know how u go on ;)
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Postby dayton » Tue Dec 18, 2012 10:53 am

wub wrote:Dark vibes on this, had a wicked suffociation vibe about it with the clipped frequencies :D


hehe..need to change it
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Postby Tordal » Tue Dec 18, 2012 3:18 pm

hey mate, really good work on that one. like it deep and dark :)

pretty much what the others said, little bit work on the frequencies, but that's concerning almost all of us on here ;)

greetz from erlangen/germany :D
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Postby FESKO » Wed Dec 19, 2012 2:02 am

yeah i really like this... the mix needs a bit of work but otherwise sick!
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Postby dayton » Wed Dec 19, 2012 10:48 am

Tordal wrote:hey mate, really good work on that one. like it deep and dark :)

pretty much what the others said, little bit work on the frequencies, but that's concerning almost all of us on here ;)

greetz from erlangen/germany :D



thx for the words man...grüsse zurück :t:
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Postby dayton » Wed Dec 19, 2012 10:48 am

Mitch_dubstepuk wrote:yeh sounding nice there,everything seems to be there, have a go at what i said and let me know how u go on ;)


will holla back mate
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Postby dayton » Wed Dec 19, 2012 10:49 am

FESKO wrote:yeah i really like this... the mix needs a bit of work but otherwise sick!



big ups! yeah will work on a new mix down!!
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Postby qqqqqqq » Wed Dec 19, 2012 12:33 pm

This is straight up hella cool. I don't usually dig the dark stuff, but I think you've managed to expand my taste, so well fucking done.
Is this at 140bpm?

And also what the others have said ala mix. I'd love a 320 when it's redone!
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Postby dayton » Fri Dec 21, 2012 6:34 pm

qqqqqqq wrote:This is straight up hella cool. I don't usually dig the dark stuff, but I think you've managed to expand my taste, so well fucking done.
Is this at 140bpm?

And also what the others have said ala mix. I'd love a 320 when it's redone!


haha thats how it should be!
new mixdown in the making!
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