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Feedback much appreciated. Be harsh! :)

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Post by RATCUB » Sun Dec 16, 2012 11:04 pm

Been producing for a year. Really ANY critisim or feedback is very appreciated.

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Post by Rappone » Sun Dec 16, 2012 11:10 pm

Good switch ups. Nice evilish vibe on the whole track. good job with the wobbles. full bass.

percs are much harder than the kick. The wobble gets too loud at some points and swallows up the whole track. Add a couple more elements, and this would bang hard.
I like it. nice job!

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Post by RATCUB » Sun Dec 16, 2012 11:31 pm

Thanks man. Should I EQ the percent better?

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Post by RATCUB » Sun Dec 16, 2012 11:31 pm

*perc

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Post by Rappone » Sun Dec 16, 2012 11:36 pm

I would say so yeah

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Dark, Minimal song in need of Feedback. [DuB]

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Post by RATCUB » Mon Dec 17, 2012 4:04 am

Bump

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Re: Dark, Minimal song in need of Feedback. [DuB]

Post by RATCUB » Mon Dec 17, 2012 6:34 am

What about this should be fixed, or done better?

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Post by Rasperdub » Mon Dec 17, 2012 7:11 am

in my opinion i believe when your modulation comes in at 55 seconds... have it fade in. also, just do one long modulation of it you are drowning out the track out with it, dont repeat it so much..... ... it kinda takes away from the track. I like it though... basically it just needs some cleaning up. That is just my two cents though. Other then that... i really like the idea. Keep it up, i wanna hear it when its complete.
Nice Intro track... dark trance type 140bpm.

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Post by wub » Mon Dec 17, 2012 9:49 am

Yeah, not a fan of that long drawn out wobble. The tune is minimal, but to the point of being noticeably empty, like it's missing a hook element to drive it along and give it some cohesiveness.

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Post by RATCUB » Mon Dec 17, 2012 5:22 pm

wub wrote:Yeah, not a fan of that long drawn out wobble. The tune is minimal, but to the point of being noticeably empty, like it's missing a hook element to drive it along and give it some cohesiveness.
I agree, but what can be done to change that? To make it more interesting.

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Re: Dark, Minimal song in need of Feedback. [DuB]

Post by wub » Mon Dec 17, 2012 6:28 pm

Add a hook element?

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