Dubstep bassline ATTEMPT, [WARNING: NOOB WORK]

[Comet8]

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Attempt after attempt.....it still sucks!
I want some honest opinions on this, don't worry i can take it!

[Cyptek]

Try not to wobble the whole thing!

[DHALE]

I think you're on the right track, you just need to make it less consistent and change it up a bit, like the previous comment said, don't wobble the whole thing, try a melody, if not, so be it and make music in your own way. your bassline doesn't need to sound like something somebody else has done before!

Cheers mate! and good luck

[wub]

Good basis, but as per the above you don't need to have the whole thing with an LFO on it. Think of the bassline as two main parts - the sound and the melody. Get those two complimenting each other then apply the wobble where the feel of the bassline dictates it should go.

If that makes sense.