florianmusic - Agonizing Cry

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florianmusic
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florianmusic - Agonizing Cry

Post by florianmusic » Mon Feb 18, 2013 11:03 pm

Hey Guys,

please give me some feedback to my new song! :)

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Re: florianmusic - Agonizing Cry

Post by SemTex » Mon Feb 18, 2013 11:08 pm

good track, reminds me of avicii. vocal chops are sounding smart.
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Re: florianmusic - Agonizing Cry

Post by florianmusic » Mon Feb 18, 2013 11:16 pm

Thank you, nice to hear this!
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Re: florianmusic - Agonizing Cry

Post by zeekazi » Tue Feb 19, 2013 12:38 am

Nice tight drums, sit well with the lead synth. The wraaw synth could use more impact though, I think it needs a dedicated sub and maybe turn down the arps so it doesn't have to compete with them. The next section is quite nice, agreed with SemTex about the vocals too. I think with the main drop you should have a sub attached to each synth so that it remains even throughout, giving the song more impact. Overall nice job though, keep it up!
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Re: florianmusic - Agonizing Cry

Post by florianmusic » Tue Feb 19, 2013 1:56 pm

Thanks for this nice Feedback, it really helps me.
I will try putting a sub on it.
Thx:)
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Re: florianmusic - Agonizing Cry

Post by florianmusic » Wed Feb 20, 2013 1:20 pm

More Feedback please :)
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