Murder Musket-Waiting Rooms (Electronic/Funk)

[Murder Musket]

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what do you guys think of this one?

[Murder Musket]

Ill definitely give some feedback to other tunes here in the dubs board tomorrow, but in the meantime...bumping this.
So far the only feedback ive gotten on this is from family members ... not exactly unbiased.

[O Captain]

Good positive vibes in this track!

- Synth note at 0:42 after the bend seems a little out of place, even if it is in the key
- Consider adding some more percussive elements at the beginning of the mix to drive it
- Digging the bass line once it comes in around 1:20
- Funky synth solo at around 2 minutes is great but I'm not sure if the hi hats sit well in the mix at this section, could just be my ears

-David

[Murder Musket]

Thanks man, really useful stuff.

[binakversailles]

Nice build in the intro! Loving the old school synth pitch bends and funky-ness , definitely vibing even before the drums kick in! Liking the melodies and chords great suspense building.
Nice use of the low end on the 808 kick too (i think thats what it is, maybe youre just using a sub)
Liking the feel of the drums when they kick in.
Nice track, super funky vibes and great use of lead improvisation/soloing!

[Murder Musket]

^ thanks