New DNB Tune Fixation

[DJKastro]

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let me know what you think, thanks

[lloydy]

Lose the vocal it could actually be a pretty decent tune.Really like the bassline and the drums sound tight,just really really not liking the vocal.The edits to bring the vocal in are really well put together but the mc just lacks the depth and clarity to take the track to the next level for me.Sorry if thats you spitting no offense intended!

[DJKastro]

Thanks for the feedback, the vocals are ruff they're going to be re-recorded in a proper studio on thursday so that will fix the clarity issue what do you mean when you say depth do you mean the content of the lyrics?

[lloydy]

depth do you mean the content of the lyrics?

Pretty much,i'm not knocking the content because lyrically it is ok but for me thats the problem it is just ok.The tune itself has some serious potential but the vocals take something away from it.Maybe put one together with the vocals and then another edit where you just try something different like vocal chops or something because the edits you have done already are very very well put together so maybe vocal chops could be the way forwards.

[DJKastro]

Thanks for the feedback mate, much appreciated !

[lloydy]

All good brother,it is just personal preference with most of this feedback so if your happy fuck what i think!