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Norm - Architect (Dark/Deep)

Post by Norm-uk » Sun Apr 14, 2013 3:02 pm

Another Upload

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Check it out see what you think!

Any feedback welcome

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Re: Norm - Architect (Dark/Deep)

Post by particle-jim » Sun Apr 14, 2013 8:22 pm

really nice tune, i reckon the snare could be a bit brighter though and maybe make the bass a tiny bit growlier, other than that this is really well produced, big ups
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Re: Norm - Architect (Dark/Deep)

Post by 1point5 » Mon Apr 15, 2013 3:33 pm

Solid tune, nicely produced and arranged, would def play it in a mix...

However, it doesn't really have any unique features going for it - the whole thing just sounds a little bit run-of-the-mill to me. This is of course just my opinion and I am being quite harsh, but if I were you I'd try to throw something slightly unconventional into the mix, like a weird sample or instrumental hook. Again though, can't really fault anything in the track itself, you've done a great job on the production! (Although, similarly to what particle jim said, I think a little more high-mid crunch on the snare might be nice)
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Re: Norm - Architect (Dark/Deep)

Post by sweetleww » Mon Apr 15, 2013 5:34 pm

Big tune man! curious about how that bass was synthesized? A musical hook may add some depth to the tune, or even a badass vocal sample of sorts.. but to be honest its a pretty fat tune as is so use your discretion!

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Re: Norm - Architect (Dark/Deep)

Post by Norm-uk » Wed Apr 24, 2013 1:49 am

Thanks for all the Feedback guys, il take into account what you all said!

@sweetleww i made the bass by resampling

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Re: Norm - Architect (Dark/Deep)

Post by test_recordings » Sat Apr 27, 2013 8:57 am

The hihats are too loud in my opinion, but's nicely made otherwise. As someone else said, get something special on your next track, or even make a VIP with some changes, remix with more dubwise elements etc
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