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Something's off about this beat, I need your perspective.

Post by RATCUB » Fri May 31, 2013 3:44 am

There's a few things I like about this beat but it doesn't really have much direction, any feedback is needed. Soundcloud
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Re: Something's off about this beat, I need your perspective

Post by RATCUB » Fri May 31, 2013 3:03 pm

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Re: Something's off about this beat, I need your perspective

Post by Redderious » Fri May 31, 2013 5:59 pm

While it's not perfect, this is still a really cool track. The only thing I wasn't really a fan of was that stabby sound you have in the intro. Thought it sounded a bit cheesy/generic.
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Re: Something's off about this beat, I need your perspective

Post by jackblack » Fri May 31, 2013 6:12 pm

Nice wobbles , maybe a harder sounding kick ?
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Re: Something's off about this beat, I need your perspective

Post by RATCUB » Fri May 31, 2013 8:11 pm

Redderious wrote:While it's not perfect, this is still a really cool track. The only thing I wasn't really a fan of was that stabby sound you have in the intro. Thought it sounded a bit cheesy/generic.
The arp? Yea it's super cheesy and generic, needs another layer of melody too, something catchy. What about the arrangement? I feel like it's super weird.
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Re: Something's off about this beat, I need your perspective

Post by Shock Rx » Fri May 31, 2013 8:15 pm

I really liked it. Only thing I would say is to beef up the basses a bit.
Other than that its a cool funky sort of tune. Should be quite sweet when it's finished.
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Re: Something's off about this beat, I need your perspective

Post by Redderious » Fri May 31, 2013 9:36 pm

RATCUB wrote:
Redderious wrote:While it's not perfect, this is still a really cool track. The only thing I wasn't really a fan of was that stabby sound you have in the intro. Thought it sounded a bit cheesy/generic.
The arp? Yea it's super cheesy and generic, needs another layer of melody too, something catchy. What about the arrangement? I feel like it's super weird.
I guess you can call it an arp, all the arpeggiators i've used modulate the pitch of the note your playing as well as the rate. Nothing really sprang to mind with the arrangement of the track. I guess the length of the notes used in that arp during the intro and the break throw you a bit off beat, but that's something I didn't even recognize until you mentioned the structure of the song being faulty.
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Re: Something's off about this beat, I need your perspective

Post by Ecliptual » Sun Jun 02, 2013 2:57 pm

I like what you have but it just feels like its unfinished at the moment:
I think just more basses are required :3
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Re: Something's off about this beat, I need your perspective

Post by RATCUB » Thu Jun 20, 2013 9:39 pm

Dafuuq wrote:I like what you have but it just feels like its unfinished at the moment:
I think just more basses are required :3
It does feel unfinished and I'm trying to fix that, It needs more sub, any tips for layering/Eqing the sub? (I'm newb)
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