Exterminate and Destroy - Jaws Attacks! (TRAP)

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Jaws[Attacks]
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Exterminate and Destroy - Jaws Attacks! (TRAP)

Post by Jaws[Attacks] » Tue Jun 25, 2013 4:26 pm

A new project that I'm working on-
I would appreciate feedback!

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Re: Exterminate and Destroy - Jaws Attacks! (TRAP)

Post by Jaws[Attacks] » Fri Jun 28, 2013 12:47 pm

Any feedback?

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Re: Exterminate and Destroy - Jaws Attacks! (TRAP)

Post by Murder Musket » Fri Jun 28, 2013 11:42 pm

Sorry to be harsh, but here it is... this tune sounds stiff and lifeless to me. Its well made sure, but i just cant get into it.
However, the mixdown is clean, and i can dig the drums. I think the 808 kick could do with some more release/ a longer tail.

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Re: Exterminate and Destroy - Jaws Attacks! (TRAP)

Post by Jaws[Attacks] » Wed Jul 03, 2013 3:21 pm

Thanks for the input! What makes it stiff and lifeless to you? I'm only asking in hopes to improve my future production... or at least, start to develop an understanding of what defines "life" in this context. Is it a lack of reverb, modulation, more pads, chord variation, etc...? I'm looking for constructive criticism. :)

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Re: Exterminate and Destroy - Jaws Attacks! (TRAP)

Post by TRaffikz » Thu Jul 04, 2013 1:00 am

try to switch up your leads every 16 bars or so. The same bass/woop sounds throughout the entire song get a bit boring. I mean, it's trap after all, so i'd say go more crazy and think more outside the box.

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