Sickness [Dubstep/Rap] - Clip

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DonPadawan
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Sickness [Dubstep/Rap] - Clip

Post by DonPadawan » Sat Jul 06, 2013 9:20 am

It would be nice with some critique on my newest track Sickness.

Its not done yet though :)

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Werkot
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Re: Sickness [Dubstep/Rap] - Clip

Post by Werkot » Sat Jul 06, 2013 4:47 pm

First thirteen seconds are in the totally different key than the rest of the clip, it doesn't stick out that much but could be more fitting.
Vocals sounds nice, but my opinion doesn't matter that much, as english isn't my native language, rhytm and rhymes sound okay.
Drums are nice and chunky, bass sounds great either, though it could use some deep sub, it'd be much more dope.
Good work imho, I'm definetely interested about how it's going to sound when you finish it.
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