Redslime - Skelington [Dubstep]

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redslime
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Redslime - Skelington [Dubstep]

Post by redslime » Fri Aug 30, 2013 6:34 pm

hi, this is a track I called Skelington (Turn e UP) and it´s the third track from my Ep 'Skelington EP'.

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wehlfest
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Re: Redslime - Skelington [Dubstep]

Post by wehlfest » Sat Aug 31, 2013 4:43 am

For the most part, I like the melody in the intro. Everything after the drop could be better. Less wubs and yois and more focus on the notes being played. You have a decent lead, it just gets lost behind the wubs and yois.

Try playing the melody on a piano and you'll see it's not the most enthralling. It doesn't seem to be a complete thought.
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