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Not sure what to think [Weird/140/robotic] Check it out

Post by Coeptis » Mon Dec 02, 2013 10:55 pm

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Re: Not sure what to think [Weird/140/robotic] Check it out

Post by BIG » Mon Dec 02, 2013 10:56 pm

Love that synth I would suggest removing some of the vocals they kind of get in the way but leave some in the beginning.

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Post by Coeptis » Mon Dec 02, 2013 11:02 pm

Thanks for the feedback

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Post by Echoi » Tue Dec 03, 2013 7:37 am

Great wobbles man, I made a patch exactly like it a few years back, really want to dig it out now and make something with it.

Randy Marsh samples aswell? Big up! Track got a bit samey after a while, but nice solid mix.

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Post by Jez-R » Tue Dec 03, 2013 6:20 pm

Drop and nice wobbles. Did u use a very short delay after the cutoff filter on the bass. Im intrigued by the sound design.
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Post by iquittheinternet » Tue Dec 03, 2013 7:57 pm

The wobbles are solid man. I suggest using a dash of ohmicide to get a bit more overtones on the high end to get it to pop a bit more. The kick has a nice low end with some great transients but maybe try layering something with a bit more pop on the high end. The snare has a good trap feel to it. The low end of the song feels a bit lacking like there needs to be some more sub. All in all, a pretty solid song but you might want to try changing it up a bit, it starts to feel a bit repetitive. I recommend bouncing out a sample of the wobble and just chopping it up and playing with it till you get some cool rearrangements.
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Post by Coeptis » Wed Dec 04, 2013 12:21 am

jezz wrote:Drop and nice wobbles. Did u use a very short delay after the cutoff filter on the bass. Im intrigued by the sound design.
Theres actually zero delay on the wobbles. It's a tight reverb with a camelphat patch I made a while back that basically takes any bass sound and makes it fatter. I automated different things on the reverb and the camelphat flanger so it makes it sound really wide.

And thanks everyone for the feedback its awesome and ill be taking all your advice :4:

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Post by Coeptis » Sun Dec 08, 2013 11:43 pm

Any other feedback? :P

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Post by ehbes » Mon Dec 09, 2013 4:17 am

the drums were pretty weak and boring. kick had no body to it and the snare was pretty much non existent when the midrange came in. the arrangement wasn't particularly interesting and sounded fairly generic
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Post by Coeptis » Fri Dec 13, 2013 1:15 am

I updated the track you guys should check it out and give me new feedback

https://soundcloud.com/coeptisofficial/ ... -final-mix

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