Obamah - Maze

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columbow
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Obamah - Maze

Post by columbow » Sun Jan 12, 2014 1:21 am

would be glad to hear what you think about this one
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Bertyball
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Re: Obamah - Maze

Post by Bertyball » Sun Jan 12, 2014 11:25 am

I like it! Sound big! :D Love those drums with that bass!

Just, imo, the timing between the bass and the drums is kinda off? Could be me, but sounds like they have both different tempos?

HeckXX
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Re: Obamah - Maze

Post by HeckXX » Mon Jan 13, 2014 3:29 am

nice choice of sample

the synth that happens every bar seems to be a bit too loud compared to the rest of the song i think
going to agree with the previous poster, i don't know if it is actually off beat but it sure feels that way. a little hard to find the beat

columbow
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Re: Obamah - Maze

Post by columbow » Mon Jan 13, 2014 9:28 am

thanks for your feedback!
true, it's a bit off beat, and the beat is sometimes hard to find. thats what i tried to make it sound like. maybe i should have done that a bit more subtle.
thank you again, you are helpful!

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Jez-R
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Re: Obamah - Maze

Post by Jez-R » Mon Jan 13, 2014 10:12 pm

I agree the lead bass synth is a bit loud n maybe slightly reduce the resonance on the filters a slight tad. all else is good, nice work
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F8Fabe
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Re: Obamah - Maze

Post by F8Fabe » Tue Jan 14, 2014 2:03 pm

love the drums and the groove going on - u maybe just need some more elements to fill it out - something like a bell, pluck or piano, but that´s just my oppinion ;)

could u maybe give me some feedback on my post?

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